Question

20．假設你是李明．上周日你班舉行了一次畢業(yè)聚會．請根據(jù)以下提示，給你的英國筆友 Robert 寫一封郵件，向他描述聚會的情況及談談你當時的感受．

要求：1．語句通順，意思連貫，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范；
2．必須包含所給提示，并做適當發(fā)揮；
3．行文中不得出現(xiàn)真實人名、校名或地名；
4．詞數(shù) 80左右．（郵件的開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）
Hi Robert，
We had a graduation party last Sunday．…Long before 3：00 pm，all the s tudents in my class couldn't wait to come to the hall．Our teachers and parents were invited to the party，too．First，ourmonitor made a speech．He thanked our teachers and parents sincerely．Next，we gave presentsto each other．The most exciting moment was the show time．We sang，danced and played games．Our English teacher told a story which made us all laugh．Everyone was so happy．I think the wonderful party will always be in my mind．
Do you have such a party？Please write soon．
Yours，
Li Ming．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇應用文，讓我們根據(jù)圖片內容寫一描述畢業(yè)晚會的郵件，內容是開放的，需要我們發(fā)揮自己的想象力、創(chuàng)造力和思維力，把這些內容補充完整．由題目可知，寫作時要用第一、三人稱，時態(tài)主要為一般過去時，內容要點包括：聚會情況以及當時的感受．
重要短語及高分句型：
have a graduation party
舉行一次畢業(yè)聚會
give presents to each other
互送禮物
tell a story
講故事
Long before 3：00 pm，all the students in my class couldn't wait to come to the hall．
下午三點前很久，我班所有的學生就迫不及待地來到大廳．long before在…前很久，can't wait to do sth．迫不及待地做某事，兩個短語用得好．
Our English teacher told a story which made us all laugh．
我們的英語老師講了一個讓我們所有人發(fā)笑的故事．tell a story講故事，make sb．do使得某人做某事，make使動用法，后跟不帶to的不定式．which made us all laugh是定語從句，作story的定語．
First，our monitor made a speech．
首先，我們的班長做了一個演講．first這個連接詞用得好，make a speech做演講，是重要短語．

解答 One possible version：
Hi Robert，
    We had a graduation party last Sunday．Long before 3：00 pm，all the students in my class couldn't wait to come to the hall．（高分句型）Our teachers and parents were invited to the party，too．First，our monitor made a speech．（高分句型）He thanked our teachers and parents sincerely．Next，we gave presents to each other．The most exciting moment was the show time．We sang，danced and played games．Our English teacher told a story which made us all laugh．（高分句型）（聚會情況）Everyone was so happy．I think the wonderful party will always be in my mind．（當時的感受）
Do you have such a party？Please write soon．
 
                                                               Yours，Li Ming

點評 寫應用文時，首先要看懂圖畫所表達的內容，最好列一下提綱，然后根據(jù)提綱進行寫作就不會造成離題或偏題，但要注意，文章必須要覆蓋整個要點，行文要注意簡化，不要拖沓冗長，要使用正確的句子，同時注意，要使用一定的連接詞，比如：first，second，what's more，finally等．再者，在作文完成時要注意檢查、修改，如果有時間可以先寫到草稿紙上，再抄到答題紙上，這樣更容易得高分．最后，注意使用一些句型和短語，使整篇文章意思連貫、流暢，方能成就一篇好的作文．