Question

【題目】每個(gè)人都有自己的業(yè)余愛好，有益的業(yè)余愛好不但可以陶冶我們的情操，增強(qiáng)我們的
體質(zhì)，放松我們的身心，還能讓我們?cè)趯W(xué)習(xí)或工作時(shí)精力更旺盛，效率更高。作為一名中
學(xué)生，你在忙碌的學(xué)習(xí)之余做些什么？請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇短文，談一談你的業(yè)余愛好。
1寫作要點(diǎn)提示：（1）你的業(yè)余愛好是什么；（2）重點(diǎn)講述你從事業(yè)余愛好的一次經(jīng)歷；（3）你的業(yè)余愛好對(duì)你學(xué)習(xí)、生活的影響。
2寫作要求：短文的內(nèi)容應(yīng)包含所提示的要點(diǎn)，語(yǔ)言要流暢，可圍繞提示要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)增加情節(jié)，使短文的意思連貫；短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名、校名及地名；短文的詞數(shù)在90個(gè)左右。

Answer 1

【答案】My Hobby
I like drawing. It does bring me happiness.
As a kid, I was keen on those lines and curves drawn on paper made into animals and scenes. It really could show beauty to people and express my feelings. And then I took a course so that I could get close to it and see it well. But at that time, I just did it for fun.
Years went by, I got into a long period of time filled with pressure in study. And I found it so good a way to relax. It did not any longer play an unimportant role in my living, but became my friend.
Since that time, I have felt it like a nice person deep in my heart who can talk with me with true words and make me happy with life. This is my hobby, not just a hobby, but also a true friend.
【解析】本題是寫一篇給定材料的書面表達(dá)，寫作的話題為My Hobby，在寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意符合題意，根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)；語(yǔ)言表達(dá)要符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣。
寫作步驟：
一、閱讀提示，弄清所有信息，明確寫作要點(diǎn)。
1.我喜歡……，它給我?guī)��?lái)了……
2.講述一次經(jīng)歷
3.對(duì)我的學(xué)習(xí)和生活的影響。
二、根據(jù)要點(diǎn)，寫出關(guān)鍵詞、短語(yǔ)或句子。
三、組詞成句。連句成篇。注意使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。