Question

【題目】根據(jù)漢語(yǔ)提示及要求，以 My Sports Collection為題用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文。

提示：1. 你有50個(gè)籃球、20個(gè)網(wǎng)球拍、30個(gè)棒球、40個(gè)足球、25個(gè)排球；

2. 你經(jīng)常進(jìn)行運(yùn)動(dòng)。

要求：（1）條理清楚、意思連貫、語(yǔ)句通順、書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范；

（2）不少于30個(gè)單詞。

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Answer 1

【答案】My Sports Collection

I like sports so much that I have all kinds of balls in my collecting room. There are fifty basketballs, twenty tennis rackets and thirty baseballs. I also have forty footballs and twenty-five volleyballs. I often play sports.

【解析】

寫(xiě)作思路：既然寫(xiě)My sports collection, 那么理所當(dāng)然我很喜歡體育運(yùn)動(dòng)，所以開(kāi)頭以我喜歡運(yùn)動(dòng)開(kāi)篇點(diǎn)題，后文再逐一說(shuō)明我所擁有的各種球類，在描述球類時(shí)可以用到There be句型，或者是I have…., I also have….等句型，最后做出總結(jié)，收尾呼應(yīng)。本篇作文首先開(kāi)篇點(diǎn)題I like sports so much that I have all kinds of balls in my collecting room.接下來(lái)逐一列出所擁有的各種球類，There are fifty basketballs, twenty tennis rackets and thirty baseballs. I also have forty footballs and twenty-five volleyballs.還運(yùn)用了不同的句式，避免了句式重復(fù)使用，最后用I often play sports.作為最后總結(jié)。文章符合寫(xiě)作要求，內(nèi)容全面，思路清晰。