Question

13．你一定有過難忘的旅游經(jīng)歷，它給你留下了什么印象？請(qǐng)根據(jù)你自己的經(jīng)歷和所給的提示問題，以"A Pleasant Trip"為題寫一篇短文．
提示：1．Where did you go？
2．How did you go there？
3．When did you go there？
4．How long did you stay there？
5．What did you do there？
6．What do you think of it？
要求：1．語句通順，語法正確，涵蓋所給提示并有適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．
2．詞數(shù)70左右．
A Pleasant Trip
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Answer 1

分析 高分句型：、
①We went there by bus．我們乘公共汽車去那兒．句子中by+某種交通工具表示乘坐某種交通工具．
②After lunch，some boys played football on the grass，some girls flew kites，others sang and danced under a big tree．午飯后，一些男孩在草地上踢足球，一些女孩放風(fēng)箏，另一些男孩在大樹下唱歌跳舞．句子中play football 表示踢足球，中間不加冠詞，on the grass表示在草地上；fly kites表示放風(fēng)箏．

解答 A Pleasant Trip
I went to Huoshankou Park last Saturday with my classmates．We met at the school gate at eight o'clock．We went there by bus（高分句型）．（旅游的地方以及去的方式）
We got there at about nine o'clock．It was sunny that day．（到達(dá)的時(shí)間及天氣狀況）First，we climbed the mountain．And then we had a rest and had lunch．After lunch，some boys played football on the grass，some girls flew kites，others sang and danced under a big tree（高分句型）．（所做的事情）We are very happy．（感受）
 We went back at four in the afternoon．（介紹回來的時(shí)間）

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