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15．近20年來(lái)各方面調(diào)查表明青少年體質(zhì)的下降令人擔(dān)憂．請(qǐng)你以How to keep healthy為題，寫一篇60-80詞的短文，說(shuō)說(shuō)你的看法和建議．
要求：主要包括以下內(nèi)容，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
1．體質(zhì)下降的原因；  如：eat too much junk food，have too much homework，…
2．合理的健康建議．如：some useful advice，should do more exercise，eat a balanced diet（飲食平衡），enough sleep…
How to keep healthy
Nowadays students physical fitness is declining（體質(zhì)下降） year by year．I think there are some reasons．
（體質(zhì)下降的原因）Students have too much homework to do，so they have little time to have sports．Some students eat too much junk food．That's also bad for their health．
Then，how to keep healthy？（合理建議）Here are some useful advice．First，students should do more exercise．Second，students should eat a balanced diet．They should eat more vegetables and fruits，and try to eat less junk food．Finally，enough sleep is also very important．．

Answer 1

分析 本是一篇話題作文．本文所給內(nèi)容比較詳細(xì)，我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些所給的點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái)．動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．本文的要點(diǎn)由兩點(diǎn)：1．體質(zhì)下降的原因2．合理的健康建議，根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)；由于是給別人提出建議，給出自己的觀點(diǎn)，所以人稱主要為第三人稱．注意說(shuō)話的語(yǔ)氣及主謂一致問(wèn)題．寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系．重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)句型：be bad for，F(xiàn)irst，Second，F(xiàn)inally，keep healthy等

解答 How to keep healthy
       Nowadays students'physical fitness is declining year by year．I think there are some reasons．（體質(zhì)下降的原因）Students have too much homework to do，so they have little time to have sports．Some students eat too much junk food．That's also bad for their health．
       Then，how to keep healthy？（合理建議）Here are some useful advice．First，students should do more exercise．Second，students should eat a balanced diet．They should eat more vegetables and fruits，and try to eat less junk food．Finally，enough sleep is also very important．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本篇為話題作文．在寫作中要注意層次緊湊，開(kāi)始有總說(shuō)，最后一段總結(jié)，中間分要點(diǎn)分別說(shuō)明題中給出的要點(diǎn)．用first，second，third，at last顯得層次鮮明，邏輯性很強(qiáng)．因?yàn)槲恼率翘岢鼋ㄗh，所以我們要用許多委婉的表達(dá)來(lái)給別人提出建議，注意不要出現(xiàn)語(yǔ)法，詞匯等的錯(cuò)誤，不要出現(xiàn)漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ)．