Question

【題目】假設(shè)你是Alice在Teenager Hotline 做兼職工作，主要接通一些中學(xué)打來的求助電話，并根據(jù)他們的問題提供建議。下面是你的一些電話記錄，請根據(jù)以下問題給Jim寫一封回信并提出建議。

I am getting fatter and fatter.My classmates are always laughing at me.

My father always smokes at home.

My best friend forget my birthday.

My father’s birthday is coming. I don’t know what to buy.

注意事項：1.嘗試用不同的句型提出建議，避免從頭到尾用一個句型。

2.所提建議一定要有積極意義并符合實際。

3.不少于80字。開頭已給出。

Dear Jim,

I’v e known your problems.

Yours

Alice

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Friends,

I've known your problems. Here is some advice that may help you. First, if you are getting fatter and fatter, I think the best way is exercising more every day. Don't eat junk food. Eat more fruit and vegetables. You must be very upset when your classmates are laughing at you. Don't mind it! Everybody has strength and weakness.

Everybody knows that smoking is bad for health. If your father smokes at home, you should have a talk with him. Try to help him give up the habit. If it is too difficult for him to give up the habit, you should ask him to smoke outside instead of at home.
As for your father's birthday party, what about holding a surprise party for him? Write some wishes on paper. Then make some paper planes. Throw the paper planes when he comes into room!

Yours,

Alice

【解析】

試題分析：常用的提建議句式：1. You should (do) ... 2.Maybe you could (do) ...3.Why not (do) ...?4. Why don't you (do) ...” 5.What about (doing) ...?6. How about (doing) ...?7.Would you mind (doing) ...? 8.You had better (do) ...9.If you ..., you'll (do) ...在寫作時要注意：1.寫有關(guān)提建議的話題時，要嘗試用不同的句型，避免從頭到尾只用一個句型。2.每個句型后面的固定接法一定要注意，不要用錯。3.所提建議一定要有積極意義并符合實際。

寫作亮點：該文用了一些短語和句式，如：if you are getting fatter and fatter, I think the best way is exercising more every day. Everybody knows that smoking is bad for health. If your father smokes at home, you should have a talk with him. Try to help him give up the habit. If it is too difficult for him to give up the habit, you should ask him to smoke outside instead ofspan> at home. 語句通順，段落清晰。所用句式靈活多變。