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【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)

某英語(yǔ)報(bào)開(kāi)展“How to Deal with Our Stress Problems”征文比賽，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)提示的內(nèi)容，簡(jiǎn)要描述并適當(dāng)發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：

1. 盡管我們常常感到有壓力，但是我們應(yīng)該找到合適的方式來(lái)解壓。

2. 我們可以穿像藍(lán)色和白色一樣的冷色調(diào)來(lái)使我們自己感到放松；

2. 我們應(yīng)該足夠細(xì)心，因?yàn)椤笆е�毫厘，謬以千里”�?/span>

3. 我們也應(yīng)該有自己業(yè)余愛(ài)好，有可能的話，參加一些活動(dòng)的選拔;

4. 任何時(shí)候都不要失去信心。通過(guò)努力學(xué)習(xí)，我們會(huì)取得大的進(jìn)步。

5. 有問(wèn)題時(shí)，我們…

要求：1. 內(nèi)容須包含所有要點(diǎn)，語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫；

2. 詞數(shù)90個(gè)左右； 3. 第5點(diǎn)的內(nèi)容需展開(kāi)合理想象，用2句話補(bǔ)充完整。

Answer 1

【答案】

How to Deal with Our Stress Problems

Although we often feel stressed, we should find some suitable ways to deal with stress. We can wear calm colours like blue and white to make us feel relaxed. We should be careful enough, because “a miss is as good as a mile”. We should also have our own hobbies, try out for some activities if possible. Don’t lose heart at any time. We will make great progress through hard work. When having problems, we can ask people around us for help. It’s not wise to keep our worries to ourselves.

【解析】

試題分析：這篇作文給出了寫(xiě)作的提綱，在寫(xiě)作時(shí)要構(gòu)思好文章的結(jié)構(gòu)，注意要點(diǎn)一定齊全。句子要完整，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，注意時(shí)態(tài)的變化和主謂一致。文中可適當(dāng)使用一些連接詞來(lái)加強(qiáng)文章的邏輯性。

寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：這篇作文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰完整，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確流利，要點(diǎn)齊全。文中有一些好的表達(dá)方式如We can wear calm colours like blue and white to make us feel relaxed. We should be careful enough, because “a miss is as good as a mile”. We should also have our own hobbies, try out for some activities if possible.等等。