Question

15．遵守秩序是每一個(gè)公民應(yīng)該具備的良好品質(zhì)．請(qǐng)以Rules Make Life Beautiful為題，談?wù)勀銓?duì)遵守秩序的看法．
提示：
1．表達(dá)你對(duì)遵守秩序的看法；
2．通過(guò)描述自身的經(jīng)歷或你所了解的社會(huì)現(xiàn)象，闡明觀點(diǎn)；
3．提出你的希望或解決辦法．
要求：
1．內(nèi)容完整，語(yǔ)句通順，書(shū)寫(xiě)工整；
2．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和校名；
3.80詞左右．

Answer 1

分析 本文主題為：Rules Make Life Beautiful（規(guī)則讓生活更美好）
寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)為：1．表達(dá)你對(duì)遵守秩序的看法；
2．通過(guò)描述自身的經(jīng)歷或你所了解的社會(huì)現(xiàn)象，闡明觀點(diǎn)；
3．提出你的希望或解決辦法．

解答 Possible Version One：
Rules Make Life Beautiful
Rules mean something that all the citizens should try their best to guard．
Rules are everywhere around us--in schools，families，or the streets．We must obey them because rules keep life in good order．For example，if we don't obey the traffic rules，it will cause a lot of trouble．A terrible traffic accident happened to one of my friends a few days ago because he jumped a red light．He was badly hurt．So I do hope everyone of us keeps the rules．
If life was a garden，the rules would be green fingers．They make the garden more beautiful．Possible Version Two：
Rules Make Life Beautiful
Rules tell us what we may，must or must not do in a particular situation．Rules make our life and work run smoothly．
Rules are needed everywhere in our society，even when we are playing a game．However，sometimes，people break the rules．Last term，I played soccer with my friends．Unexpectedly，David，who is a pushy guy，hit John on the head bitterly because of his losing the game，which made all of us，including our head teacher and his parents，get into a big trouble．
As you see，without rules，civilized life would be impossible．Only by obeying the rules can we live a beautiful life．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 考生需抓住寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行寫(xiě)作，理清寫(xiě)作結(jié)構(gòu)，能夠?qū)ψ约旱目捶ㄕ归_(kāi)分述，最好能用事實(shí)來(lái)進(jìn)行例證．