Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

為了踐行社會(huì)主義核心價(jià)值觀，我校決定進(jìn)行以“文明禮貌伴我行”為主題的英語征文比賽，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示及要求，寫篇短文參賽。

重要提示：

1.尊敬(respect)父母，幫助他們做家務(wù)。

2.對(duì)人有禮貌，誠實(shí)友好，幫助他人。

3.不在公共場(chǎng)所大聲講話，不亂扔垃圾。

4.節(jié)約糧食，節(jié)約用水。

要求：1.短文需包含以上所有信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

2.語句通順，意思連貫，書寫工整。

3.文中不能出現(xiàn)本人的真實(shí)信息。

4.字?jǐn)?shù)要求在80左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Try to be polite as a middle school student

As a middle school student, we should have good manners ___________________________

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_____.In a word, good manners can make a difference and lead to a better future.

Answer 1

【答案】

Try to be polite as a middle school student

As a middle school student, we should have good manners. First, parents are our closest people. We should respect them and try to help them do housework. In school, we should be polite to others. We should be honest and friendly. We also need to help others as often as possible. In public places, we can’t speak loudly and can’t throw rubbish everywhere. In our daily life, we should save food and water.

In a word, good manners can make a difference and lead to a better future.

【解析】

試題分析：這篇短文要求我們寫一篇征文，為了學(xué)校進(jìn)行的“文明禮貌伴我行”的活動(dòng)。題目中給出了具體的寫作內(nèi)容，我們需要結(jié)合自己的日常生活的情況，將這些內(nèi)容補(bǔ)充豐富一下。通過分析可知，這篇短文我們應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，第一人稱來敘述。題目中給出的四點(diǎn)內(nèi)容都要包括在內(nèi)，不要遺漏要點(diǎn)。還需要注意內(nèi)容的層次，要有條理。寫作時(shí)，要盡量使用一些平時(shí)積累的句型和短語，句子之間要使用一些連詞，使文意連貫，表達(dá)流暢。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文中作者按照題目的要求，講述了如何做一名有禮貌的中學(xué)生。短文中作者分成了幾個(gè)方面來敘述，首先是如何對(duì)待父母；其次是如何對(duì)待別人；然后在公共場(chǎng)合如何做；最后是在日常生活中的做法。整篇短文層次清晰，內(nèi)容完整。另外短文中也使用了一些好的句型和短語，如We should respect them and try to help them do housework、We should be honest and friendly. We also need to help others as often as possible、In our daily life, we should save food and water等。