Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)（共1題，15分）

隨著人民生活水平的提升，手機(jī)成為生活中必不可少的一個(gè)重要溝通交流工具，也是被認(rèn)為是世界上最有用的發(fā)明物之一。請(qǐng)以“Mobile phone”為題，寫一篇80詞左右的文章。

內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：1.手機(jī)發(fā)明前，人們之間常用的聯(lián)系方式；

2.你認(rèn)為手機(jī)的發(fā)明給人們生活帶來(lái)的利弊；（各談兩點(diǎn)）

寫作要求：短文須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫。

Mobile phone

With the improving of our living standard, the mobile phone has become an important communicative tool.

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Answer 1

【答案】

With the improving of our living standard, the mobile phone has become an important communicative tool. And it is seen as one of the most useful inventions of all time. We all know that many years ago, People in different places can only connect with each other by writing letters. It is the mobile phone that makes it easy to get information from all over the world. And we can also enjoy the music or films through the mobile phone. However, every coin has two sides. When we are enjoying the benefits that the mobile phone has brought us, we now face many problems. On the one hand, it’s bad for our eyes to use the mobile phone for a long time. On the other hand, some students spend much time playing games on the mobile phone.

In a word, whether you like it or not, the mobile phone indeed plays an important role in our life.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文給出了一些要點(diǎn)，并給出了作文的開頭。我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象說(shuō)出自己的觀點(diǎn)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)來(lái)寫，要注意主謂一致等問(wèn)題。寫作中要適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文多次使用連接詞and、However，以及短語(yǔ)On the one hand，In a word等等為文章增色不少。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理。