Question

【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)

隨著社會(huì)的發(fā)展，我們的生活發(fā)生了巨大的變化。請(qǐng)寫(xiě)一篇短文描述你自己以及你的生活過(guò)去和現(xiàn)在的變化。 要求語(yǔ)句通順。字?jǐn)?shù)80個(gè)左右。

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Answer 1

【答案】

I have changed a lot in the last few years. I used to have long hair, but now I have short hair. I used to be fat; now I am not so fat as before because I often did exercise last year, and I will hold on it. I think it is good for my health. I used to take a walk with my mother after supper, but now I don’t have enough time. I am in Grade Nine now, and I have to study hard for the entrance exam, so I have to spend most of the time on study. I used to walk to school last year, but now I always go to school in my father’s car. It is faster and safer.

During these years, my life and I myself have really changed a lot.

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱(chēng)和時(shí)態(tài)。要求介紹。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：這篇文章語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，敘事清楚，詞匯及時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用正確，能夠把提示的內(nèi)容敘述清楚，語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫是一篇不錯(cuò)的文章。