Question

11．為了使同學們在校園內能更加健康快樂地成長，學校決定向同學們征求建議．假如你是劉波，用英語向校長寫一篇80個詞左右的建議信．開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
注意：1、文中應包含所給要點，并提出自己的建議，不少于三點；
2、不能出現(xiàn)真實的校名和姓名；
3、書寫規(guī)范，卷面整潔．
Dear Headmaster，
  I'm very glad to write a letter to you．These days we are talking about how to have a better school life．Here are some of my suggestions．First，I hope our school willopen the library more often．Second，I thinkour school can organize more after-class activities． Next I hope our school will give us more time for sports，art and music．And I suggest our school should organize fewer exams as well．
As for our teachers，I hope they will be our friends and make classes more interesting． And if they can talk less but more clearly in class，wewill be more interested in studying and have more time to practice．What's more，I hope they will give us less homework and finish classes on time．
Hope my suggestions will be helpful．Thanks for reading my letter!
                                                               Yours sincerely，
                                                                    Liu Bo．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內容提出一些為了使同學們更加健康快樂地成長的建議，給校長寫一封信，注意信件的格式．時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時．人稱主要為第一人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
1學校（1）經(jīng)常開放圖書館（2）組織更多的課后活動…
2老師：（1）讓課堂有趣；（2）課上說的少且清晰…
常用到的重點短語：
make+sth+adj讓某物怎樣
be interested in 感興趣
what's more 再者
on time 準時
【高分句型】
1．And I suggest①our school should organize fewer exams②as well．
①suggest后是省略了引導詞that的賓語從句．
②as well 也，放句末．
2．And①if they can talk less but more clearly in class，we will②be more interested in studying and have more time③to practice．
①if引導的條件狀語從句，遵循主將從現(xiàn)的規(guī)則．
②be interested in 感興趣
③動詞不定式做目的狀語．
3．①What's more，I hope ②they will give us less homework and finish classes on time．
①what's more 再者
②hope后是省略了引導詞that的賓語從句．on time 準時

解答 Dear Headmaster，
     I'm very glad to write a letter to you．These days we are talking about how to have a better school life．Here are some of my suggestions．First，I hope our school will open the library more often．（經(jīng)常開放圖書館）Second，I think our school can organize more after-class activities．（組織更多的課后活動） Next I hope our school will give us more time for sports，art and music．（更多的時間運動）And I suggest our school should organize fewer exams as well．（考試少一點）【高分句型】
As for our teachers，I hope they will be our friends and make classes more interesting．（讓課堂有趣） And if they can talk less but more clearly in class，we will be more interested in studying and have more time to practice．【高分句型】（課上說的少且清晰）What's more，I hope they will give us less homework and finish classes on time．【高分句型】（準時下課；家庭作業(yè)少一點）
Hope my suggestions will be helpful．Thanks for reading my letter!
                                                                                                             
Yours sincerely，
   Liu Bo．

點評 這是一篇應用文，注意信件的格式，主要是提出建議，注意表達的委婉性，考生在平時的英語學習中需牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當引用，使文章的表達更有邏輯性，更富有條理，也可為文章增色不少