Question

8．現(xiàn)在環(huán)境變得越來(lái)越差．環(huán)境問(wèn)題影響著人們的工作，學(xué)習(xí)，生活．而我們的工作，生活，生產(chǎn)又使環(huán)境污染越來(lái)越嚴(yán)重…如何保護(hù)我們的環(huán)境？請(qǐng)以"How to protect/save our environment/world？"為題寫(xiě)一篇短文．
提示：存在問(wèn)題：
1水污染和大氣污染越來(lái)越嚴(yán)重
2森林被破壞和砍伐
3白色垃圾隨處可見(jiàn)
要求：如何改善/保護(hù)環(huán)境？至少3---4個(gè)方面，80詞左右．
How to protect our environment
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Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
①I(mǎi)n order to live a better life，②it's time for us to protect our world．
為了有更好的生活，是我們保護(hù)地球的時(shí)間了．
①in order to為了…做目的狀語(yǔ)．
【高分句型二】
Use things for as long as possible．
東西使用的盡可能的久．
as…as possible盡可能的…

解答 How to protect our environment
The environmental pollution is more and more serious today．We have no clean water to drink because of water pollution．And when trees are cut down，some animals disappear．There is more and more dirty smoke in the air．People's health has been greatly affected by air，noise and water pollution．（水污染和大氣污染越來(lái)越嚴(yán)重，森林被破壞和砍伐，白色垃圾隨處可見(jiàn)）Many people died of diseases．In order to live a better life，it's time for us to protect our world．【高分句型一】
Firstly，we shouldn't throw away rubbish everywhere．And we should recycle，reduce and reuse things，for this saves money and reduces pollution．Use things for as long as possible．【高分句型二】Don't use plastic bags．Also，we must plant more trees and stop people cutting them．（如何改善）We hope our world is more and more beautiful．

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