Question

同學(xué)們，在你們成長的過程中，想到過母親的付出嗎？請寫一篇60—80詞左右的小短文，描述母親為你做的事和你的感受。以下提示詞僅供參考。

cook meals, wash clothes, read books to…, go hiking with…, happy, exciting

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Answer 1

【答案】

 

One possible version:

My mother is always the busiest in my family. She does a lot for me and my whole family. She does most of the housework, such as cooking meals, washing clothes and so on. When I was still a little child, she read stories to me every night before I went to sleep. And she often took me to parks, zoos and other places to have fun. I am thankful to her for everything she did. I love my mother. （ 80 words）

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇命題作文。在要點中給出了寫作的大致方向，需要自己發(fā)揮的地方較多。動筆前要圍繞要點組織材料，確定時態(tài)主要詞匯等問題，由于是描述自己經(jīng)歷過的事情，故時態(tài)主要是一般過去時態(tài)和現(xiàn)在完成時態(tài)，人稱是第一人稱。寫作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性；語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。

考點：命題作文的寫作

點評：本題給出的材料較為簡略，可發(fā)揮的空間較大，所以自己可以選擇自己比較熟悉的內(nèi)容發(fā)揮，利用自己熟悉的單詞句式等。