Question

16．我們都知道，健康對(duì)每個(gè)人來(lái)說(shuō)都很重要．但是你知道該如何保持健康嗎？根據(jù)以下提示詞寫(xiě)出給人們保持健康的建議．（文章不少于80字）
tips（小竅門），take a walk，go to bed and get up early，junk food，pay attention to                     ．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
First，it's necessary to have a good eating habit．首先，必須要有一個(gè)好的飲食習(xí)慣．
it is+adj+to do sth對(duì)某人來(lái)說(shuō)做某事是怎么樣的，it是形式主語(yǔ)，動(dòng)詞不定式做真正主語(yǔ)．
【高分句型二】
If we try our best，we will be very healthy．如果我們盡力，我們就會(huì)很健康．
if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句，遵循主將從現(xiàn)的規(guī)則．

解答 How to keep healthy？
Healthy habits are very important for us．How should we keep healthy？First，it's necessary to have a good eating habit．【高分句型一】We should eat more fruit and vegetables and less junk food  very day．Pay attention not to eat too much or too little．（健康飲食）Second，we should exercise often to build us up．Try to exercise for half an hour，you can do it twice or three times every week．，such as taking a walk after dinner．Doing exercise can help make us strong．（參加運(yùn)動(dòng)，強(qiáng)身健體）Third，Staying up at night is bad for our health．You should go to bed and get up early．If we can't get enough sleep，we may have a headache．（早睡早起，不熬夜）Fourth，try to be happy，because happiness is important for our health，it's the best medicine．（保持好心情，笑對(duì)生活）Finally，we must go to see a doctor when we get ill．（有病看醫(yī)生）      If we try our best，we will be very healthy．【高分句型二】

點(diǎn)評(píng) 在寫(xiě)作中要注意層次緊湊，開(kāi)始有總說(shuō)，最后一段總結(jié)，中間分要點(diǎn)分別說(shuō)明題中給出的要點(diǎn)．用first，second，third，at last顯得層次鮮明，邏輯性很強(qiáng)．因?yàn)槲恼率翘岢鼋ㄗh，所以我們要用許多委婉的表達(dá)來(lái)給別人提出建議，如should，You'd better等．注意不要出現(xiàn)語(yǔ)法，詞匯等的錯(cuò)誤，不要出現(xiàn)漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ)．