Question

11．"騎行"這一低碳環(huán)保的休閑運動受到越來越多人的青睞．"騎行"既是一種運動，又能保護環(huán)境，減少污染．請以"Enjoying Cycling"為題，寫一篇90詞左右的英語短文，介紹騎行的好處和注意事項．
--騎行的好處（save energy，strong，less pollution，easy to park）
Enjoying Cycling---注意事項（traffic rules，safe，not…too fast）
---發(fā)出倡議（let's，good，healthy）
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Enjoying Cycling
Nowadays cycling is becoming more and more popular with young people．
                                                     

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
sometimes we may cause traffic accidents if we are not careful enough如果我們不夠小心，我們可能有時候會引起交通事故．
if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句．
【高分句型二】
It's important for us to obey the traffic rules對于我們來說遵守交通規(guī)則是重要的．
it is+adj+for sb+to do sth對某人來說做某事是怎么樣的，it是形式主語，動詞不定式做真正主語．

解答 Enjoy Cycling
Nowadays cycling is becoming more and more popular with young people．It's a useful sport and it helps to keep us fit．It doesn't cause air pollution．It can help us save energy．What's more，cycling costs less．When we are cycling，we feel active and relaxed．It's full of fun．（好處）
However，sometimes we may cause traffic accidents if we are not careful enough【高分句型一】．So we should keep safe on the road．We shouldn't ride too fast．Remember to wear bicycle helmets when riding．It's important for us to obey the traffic rules．【高分句型二】（注意事項）Let's get on bicycles and enjoy cycling!（倡議）

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