Question

13．美國(guó)朋友Smith先生五年前參觀過(guò)你的學(xué)校，他最近來(lái)信希望了解你校的現(xiàn)況． 假設(shè)你是李華，請(qǐng)參照下面圖表所提供的信息，給他寫一封回信，介紹你校的變化．
注意：回信必須包括圖表的主要內(nèi)容，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使內(nèi)容連貫；詞數(shù)100左右．信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)．請(qǐng)將答案填寫在答題卡指定的位置．

總體面貌	校園變化很大，新建多座大樓，呈現(xiàn)新貌．
具體陳述	圖書(shū)館和和實(shí)驗(yàn)樓并排，位于教學(xué)樓后面； 圖書(shū)館藏書(shū)豐富，實(shí)驗(yàn)設(shè)備齊全	2010年建成
	擴(kuò)建操場(chǎng)，是原來(lái)的兩倍大	去年建成
	擬建餐廳，在南面，操場(chǎng)對(duì)面	明年建
校貌	校園內(nèi)外種滿鮮花、樹(shù)木具體描述

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容是根據(jù)圖表信息介紹我校的變化，時(shí)態(tài)用一般過(guò)去時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)．人稱用第一人稱與第三人稱．寫作要點(diǎn)包括：1．總體面貌 2．具體陳述 3．校貌．常用的重點(diǎn)句型和短語(yǔ)：In general總之，as large as與…一樣大，be satisfied with對(duì)…滿意，if possible如果可能的話等．

解答 Dear Mr．Smith，
I was very happy to receive your letter informing me that you want to know some changes about our school．And I'm glad to tell youWhen you visited our school five years ago，its facilities were quite simple and crude．But now it has changes a lot．．（總體面貌） In general，there are lots of trees planted around our school （樣貌）（高分句型）． The library and the lab building were built in 2010．They both lie the behind of the teaching building．There are many books in the library and the lab facilities are all in readiness（齊全的）．Last year，a new playground was built，it is two times as large as the original（高分句型）．Next year，we will build a dinning hall，it will lie in the south of our school，across from the playground．The students are satisfied with the new changes． （具體陳述）We hope that you can visit us again if possible．
Best wishes．
Yours，
Li Hua．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 寫作之前要先審題，圖表內(nèi)容要包括在作文中，并對(duì)圖表進(jìn)行橫向和縱向的比較，本題中圖表內(nèi)容較為簡(jiǎn)單，要注意句式的多樣性，適當(dāng)?shù)氖褂觅e語(yǔ)從句，轉(zhuǎn)折詞however，連詞and等．考生可在作文之前對(duì)每部分列出大致的提綱，做到主題明確，條理清楚．可以根據(jù)所給提綱或已知信息列出每段的主題句，為全文的展開(kāi)做好鋪墊．注意行文連貫，書(shū)寫規(guī)范，不要出現(xiàn)一些諸如語(yǔ)法或詞匯的錯(cuò)誤．