Question

【題目】每個(gè)人有自己的美麗夢(mèng)想。最近，你班就“我們的夢(mèng)想”展開了一次討論。下面是你們小組的談?wù)撉闆r匯總，請(qǐng)根據(jù)所給要點(diǎn)寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文，向英語(yǔ)校刊投稿.

Name	Dream
Philip	想當(dāng)音樂家，很有音樂天賦，曾經(jīng)創(chuàng)作了具有地方特色的音樂并獲獎(jiǎng)
Anita	比起做導(dǎo)演更想當(dāng)演員，她在校戲劇社擔(dān)任主角，2017年首次亮相熒屏
Andy	擅長(zhǎng)解謎，夢(mèng)想成為一名偵探, 查明一切真相
I	想做導(dǎo)游，……
為了實(shí)現(xiàn)夢(mèng)想，我認(rèn)為……

要求:1. 表達(dá)清楚，語(yǔ)法正確，上下文連貫；

2. 必須包括所有相關(guān)信息，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

3. 詞數(shù):100詞左右(開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))；

4. 不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名等。

Our dreams

Recently, we have held a discussion to talk about our dreams. Here’s the report about our ideas.

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Answer 1

【答案】Recently, we have held a discussion to talk about our dreams. Here’s the report about our ideas.

Phillip wants to be a musician. He has a gift for music. He once created the music with local colour and won an award. Anita would rather be an actress than a director. She plays the lead role in the school Drama Club. She made her first appearance on screen in 2017. As Andy is good at solving mysteries, he dreams of being a detective to find out all the truth. My dream is to be a guide. I am interested in different cultures and famous attractions all over the world. As a guide, I will show the tourists around different places of interest in the world.

To realize our dreams, I think we should work harder. Remember, it is you who shape your life and future.

【解析】

這是一篇給材料作文，介紹了我們小組談?wù)摰摹拔覀兊膲?mèng)想”的情況匯總。

結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和一般過去時(shí)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：Phillip wants to……，He once created……，Anita would rather……，My dream is……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。