Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)（本題10分）根據(jù)要求完成短文寫作，請將作文寫在答題卡指定的位置上。

了解了Becky的家人情況，請 以“My Family” 為題, 寫一篇短文, 介紹你的家庭成員。內(nèi)容包括：

1. 家有四口人，父母，弟弟和我。我們來自北京。

2. 我今年12歲，弟弟10歲。我最愛的運(yùn)動(dòng)是籃球，弟弟喜歡游泳。

3. 父親是汽車司機(jī)，母親是教師。母親周末喜歡購物。

作文要求：

1. 不能照抄原文; 不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校真實(shí)的名稱和學(xué)生的真實(shí)姓名。

2. 語句連貫，詞數(shù)在70個(gè)左右。作文的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

My Family

I have a big family. __________________________________________________________

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_______________________________________________________________________________

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I love my family very much.

Answer 1

【答案】

I have a big family. There are four people in my family, my father, my mother, my brother and me. We are from Beijing. I am 12 years old, my brother is 10 years old. My favourite sport is basketball, but my brother likes swimming. My father is a bus driver in Beijing. My mother is a teacher, and she likes going shopping at weekends. I love my family very much.

【解析】

試題分析：本文敘述Becky一家人的情況，所以句子的時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，為了句子即上下文的銜接要用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，不要遺漏要點(diǎn)。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：短文用了一些短語和句式，如：There are four people in my family, my father, my mother, my brother and me. We are from Beijing. My favourite sport is basketball, but my brother likes swimming. My mother is a teacher, and she likes going shopping at weekends.文中用了連詞but，and等，增加了短文的亮點(diǎn)。