Question

【題目】書面表達

根據(jù)要求完成短文寫作。

你或你身邊的同學是否也和Carnegie有著相似的經(jīng)歷呢?假設你校將舉行一場主題為“失敗乃成功之母”的英語演講比賽,請你寫一篇演講稿,談談你的看法。

內容包括:

1.描述你或同學的一次類似的經(jīng)歷;

2.談談你或同學在這次經(jīng)歷中的收獲(至少兩點)。

作文要求:

1.不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學校真實的名稱和學生的真實姓名。

2.語句連貫,詞數(shù)80左右。開頭和結尾已經(jīng)給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。

Good morning,everyone!I think everyone will agree with the saying that “Failure is the mother of success.”

Answer 1

【答案】Good morning,everyone!I think everyone will agree with the saying that “Failure is the mother of success.” When I was in Grade 7,I took part in the 100-meter race in the school sports meeting.I was not fast enough to win any prize.And I was really sad.But my mother told me not to give up.So I kept practicing running after school every day and won first prize in the race in the following year.From this experience,I learn that we should never give up when we are facing difficulties.And I think if we try hard enough,we’ll finally succeed.

Don’t be afraid of failures.If you learn how to deal with failures,you will surely taste success in the end.

【解析】這是一篇提綱類作文，要求寫一篇演講稿介紹自己或同學的一次經(jīng)歷，并談談自己或同學在經(jīng)歷中的兩點收獲。因為是演講稿所以開頭要對聽眾進行問候，結尾表達謝意。結合本文題材內容可知，在描述過去的經(jīng)歷時，應使用一般過去時，謂語動詞用過去式；在描寫經(jīng)歷中的收獲時，應使用一般現(xiàn)在時；寫作時注意時態(tài)和時間狀語的一致問題。寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關系。上下文之間可以適當使用連接詞,注意描述的全面性；語言的表述應該符合語法的結構，造句應該符合英語的表達習慣。