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2．在今年的"地球一小時(shí)（Earth Hour）"活動(dòng)中，中國(guó)很多城市的人們都自覺(jué) 熄燈一小時(shí)，體現(xiàn)了低碳生活的新理念．假定你是CCTV9的記者，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下采訪信息用英語(yǔ)寫一篇80個(gè)詞左右的新聞稿．注意：部分內(nèi)容已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．

Thank you for joining CCTV's Around China show！Now it's 8：45p．m．during the famous Earth Hour．People in many cities have turned off their lights and are having a very special time．In Shanghai，
some people are taking a walk with their family．They feel very relaxed．In Beijing，some people are having a nice talk with their friends．And in Ningbo，some young people are holding a party in the park，singing and dancing．Without lights，people can also enjoy themselves．
Many people share with us their plans．Some say they will spend more time with their family and friends．Others say they will try their best to protect the environment，like planting more trees，saving water and so on．What's more，some people tell me that they will use paper both sides （ drive less，ride bikes，use plastic bags less…） in their daily life．
Many people share with us their plans．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容是為"地球一小時(shí)（Earth Hour）"活動(dòng)寫一篇采訪新聞稿．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)．人稱主要為第三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開(kāi)作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開(kāi)作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1．人們正在做什么：（1）上海：和家人散步；（2）北京：和朋友愉快交談；（3）寧波：公園里舉行聚會(huì)
2．人們打算做什么：（1）改變生活方式：花更多的時(shí)間和家人朋友一起．（2）保護(hù)環(huán)境：種更多的樹(shù)；節(jié)約用紙，兩面紙都使用
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：
take a walk散步
enjoy oneself 玩得開(kāi)心
try one's best to do sth 竭盡全力做某事
what's more再者

【高分句型】
1．①Without lights，people can also ②enjoy themselves．
①without（表否定）沒(méi)有，無(wú)，不需．
②enjoy oneself 玩得開(kāi)心，相當(dāng)于have a good time．
2．①What's more，some people tell me②that they will use paper both sides  in their daily life．
①what's more再者．
②that作為引導(dǎo)詞的賓語(yǔ)從句，作為tell的賓語(yǔ)．

解答 Thank you for joining CCTY's Around China show！Now it's 8：45 p．m．during the famous Earth Hour．People in many cities have turned off their lights are having a very special time．In Shanghai，some people are taking a walk with their family．They feel very relaxed．In Beijing，some people are having a nice talk with their friends．And in Ningbo，some young people are holding a party in the park，singing and dancing．Without lights，people can also enjoy themselves．【高分句型】（人們正在做什么）
Many people share with us their plans．Some say they will spend more time with their family and friends．Others say they will try their best to protect the environment，like planting more trees，saving water and so on．What's more，some people tell me that they will use paper both sides  in their daily life．【高分句型】（人們打算做什么）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本圖表所給材料比較詳細(xì)，考生要做的就是把這些內(nèi)容用正確的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)出來(lái)．動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并需有適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．要注意句式的多樣性，適當(dāng)?shù)氖褂觅e語(yǔ)從句，轉(zhuǎn)折詞however，連詞and等．考生可在作文之前對(duì)每部分列出大致的提綱，做到主題明確，條理清楚．可以根據(jù)所給提綱或已知信息列出每段的主題句，為全文的展開(kāi)做好鋪墊．注意行文連貫，書(shū)寫規(guī)范，不要出現(xiàn)一些諸如語(yǔ)法或詞匯的錯(cuò)誤．