Question

18．假設(shè)你是李華，最近你校組織了一場討論．討論的主題是：本市要不要修地鐵（subway）？請你根據(jù)下表所提供的信息，給某報社編輯寫一封信，客觀地介紹討論情況，并發(fā)表自己的看法．

60%的學生贊成		40%的學生反對
1．方便，快速，安全		1．花費太大，浪費錢
2．節(jié)能，無污染		2．應(yīng)花錢建更多的公路和鐵路
3．緩解地面交通擁擠；減少交通事故		3．可能破壞某些地下文物古跡（cultural relics）
個人看法	…

要求：1）表達清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫；
2）必須包括所有相關(guān)信息，并作適當發(fā)揮；
3）詞數(shù)：100詞左右；開頭已寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)．
4）不得使用真實姓名和校名等．
Dear Editor，
The students in our school had a heated discussion about whether a subway should be built in our city．
Sixty percent ofthe students are for the idea of building a subway．Compared with other formsof transport，they think，the subway is more convenient，faster and safer．Itcan save energy and have less pollution．It can make the traffic on the groundless crowded and reduce traffic accidents．
However，fortypercent of the students are against the idea．They think that building a subwaywill cost too much．It's a waste of money．We should build more highways andrailways instead with the money．What's more，building a subway may destroysome cultural relics underground．
I think a subway isa sign of a modern city．By building a subway，we can travel around our citymore easily．But we should spend as little money as possible building thesubway．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容是客觀地介紹本市要不要修地鐵的討論情況，并發(fā)表自己的看法．時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時．人稱主要為第一、三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
1.60%的學生贊成；方便，快速，安全；節(jié)能，無污染；緩解地面交通擁擠；減少交通事故
2.40%的學生反對；花費太大，浪費錢；應(yīng)花錢建更多的公路和鐵路；可能破壞某些地下文物古跡
3．個人看法 
常用到的重點短語：
compare with  與…相比較
make sth+adj 讓某某怎樣
a waste of  浪費
what's more 再者
as…as possible 盡可能…
【高分句型】
1．①Compared with other forms of transport，they think ②the subway is more convenient，faster and safer．
①過去分詞短語做方式狀語．compare with  與…相比較
②think后是省略了that的賓語從句．
2．①What's more，②building a subway may destroy some cultural relics underground．
①what's more 再者
②動名詞短語做主語．
3．But we should①spend②as little money as possible building the subway．
①spend+時間+doing sth 花時間做某事
②as…as possible 盡可能…

解答 Dear Editor，
The students in our school had a heated discussion about whether a subway should be built in our city．
Sixty percent of the students are for the idea of building a subway．Compared with other forms of transport，they think the subway is more convenient，faster and safer．【高分句型】It can save energy and have less pollution．It can make the traffic on the groundless crowded and reduce traffic accidents．（60%的學生贊成）
However，forty percent of the students are against the idea．They think that building a subway will cost too much．It's a waste of money．We should build more highways and railways instead with the money．What's more，building a subway may destroy some cultural relics underground．【高分句型】（40%的學生反對）
I think a subway is a sign of a modern city．By building a subway，we can travel around our city more easily．But we should spend as little money as possible building the subway．【高分句型】（個人看法）

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