Question

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每個人的一生中都有許多值得感謝的人，你最想感謝的人是誰呢？是父母、老師、朋友，還是…？請以Tom為名給他/她/他們寫一封信，說說你的心里話．
要求：
1.80個詞左右．
2．表達正確，行文流暢．
3．至少寫出一個具體事例．
4．信件開頭、結(jié)尾已給出，不計人總詞數(shù)．
5．文中不能出現(xiàn)考生的真實姓名、地址、學校等相關(guān)信息．
Dear，
Dear father，
I have never expressed my thanks and respect to you．Today I want to say，"I love you，dad!"In my heart，you are not only my father，but also my good friend．
Since I was born，you have given me all your love and care．In order to create a better living condition and let me receive better education，you have to work hard every day．I always remember your coming home late and feeling tired．
Except that，you are very strict with me．You often tell me to study hard，get along well with others，not to give up when facing difficulties．Once I got a C in the math exam，I felt sorry for it，I thought you would be angry，instead，you weren't angry with me，you helped me to find out why I failed，and encouraged me to be brave．Since then，I always smile at life whenever I have any trouble．Thank you very much for everything you've done for me．
Best wishes!
Yours，
Tom．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇命題作文，所給材料非常簡略，故動筆前先要圍繞要點組織材料，確定寫作內(nèi)容．寫作中注意將感謝的對象，原因等介紹清楚．在寫作時要注意時態(tài)，人稱和固定詞組的搭配，要注意語言的規(guī)范性．本文時態(tài)問題比較復雜，注意時態(tài)與時間狀語的搭配問題，人稱主要是第一人稱，注意主謂一致問題．寫作中適當使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系．
高分句型：
①In order to create a better living condition and let me receive better education，you have to work hard every day．為了創(chuàng)造一個更好的生活條件，讓我接受更好的教育，你不得不努力工作每一天．
in order to為了，引導一個條件狀語從句，let sb do sth讓某人做某事；have to必須，不得不； every day每天．
②Thank you very much for everything you've done for me．非常感謝你為我所做的一切．Thank you very much for sth為某某而感謝某人，for是一個介詞，后面通常跟名詞，代詞或者動名詞，you've done for me在這里作定語修飾everything，構(gòu)成一個定語從句．

解答 Dear father，
I have never expressed my thanks and respect to you．Today I want to say，"I love you，dad!"In my heart，you are not only my father，but also my good friend．（引出話題）
Since I was born，you have given me all your love and care．In order to create a better living condition and let me receive better education，you have to work hard every day（高分句型）．I always remember your coming home late and feeling tired．（重點寫爸爸為了我辛苦的勞作）
Except that，you are very strict with me．You often tell me to study hard，get along well with others，not to give up when facing difficulties．Once I got a C in the math exam，I felt sorry for it，I thought you would be angry，instead，you weren't angry with me，you helped me to find out why I failed，and encouraged me to be brave．Since then，I always smile at life whenever I have any trouble．（通過例子來說明爸爸對我的愛）Thank you very much for everything you've done for me（高分句型）（感謝爸爸所做的一切）．
Best wishes!
Yours，
Tom．

點評 本文是一篇小作文，寫作時動筆前先要注意認真寫作要求，確定寫作內(nèi)容；分析內(nèi)容要點，列出一些基本詞匯及詞組；注意表達的條理性，用好連接詞；為豐富文章的文采，可以多用一些復合句．最后，注意不要犯語法、句法以及搭配性錯誤，寫好后反復讀幾遍，適當修改．