Question

10．Write at least 60words on the topic"My mother's daily life"．
（寫一篇至少60個單詞題為"我媽媽的日常生活"的短文，標點符號不占格）
Suggested questions：
•What is your mother's job？
•What does your mother usually do in the morning/after work…？
•What do you think of your mother？
                                                    

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
 She has lunch in the hospital，but she never talks when she has lunch．她在醫(yī)院吃午飯，但她吃飯時從不說話．這是when引導的時間狀語從句，當…時候．   
高分句型二
 she still tries her best to make people healthy．她仍然盡力使人們健康．try one's best to do sth．盡某人最大的努力做某事．

解答 My mother is a doctor．She is hard-working．【要點一，媽媽的工作】She always goes to work at six o'clock and comes back home at eight o'clock．She has breakfast at 5：10 a．m．She often has a long break in the afternoon，for about one to two hours．She has lunch in the hospital，but she never talks when she has lunch【高分句型一，注意時間狀語從句的使用】．She has dinner when she comes back．During working，she works attentionally．Although she is not a famous doctor，she still tries her best to make people healthy【高分句型二，try one's best to do sth．的使用】【要點二，媽媽的日常生活】．She is a good doctor，and she is a good mother，too．【要點三，你覺得媽媽怎么樣】

點評 本篇寫作需注意要求中所提供的要點，不可遺漏．需在平時積累相關的詞匯，寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關系．上下文之間可以適當使用連接詞．如but，so，then等．