Question

【題目】【2012年北京】書面表達（本題共15分）

生活中每個人都有過與他人分享的體驗，如分享一本有趣的書、一段難忘的經(jīng)歷、一個閃光的想法…….現(xiàn)在，某英文報紙舉行“分享（Sharing）”為話題的征文，請你投稿。描述一次你與他人分享的經(jīng)歷，并談談你的感受。

要求：根據(jù)中文和英文參考詞匯，寫出意思連貫、符合邏輯，不少于80—100詞的短文。文中不得出現(xiàn)真實人名和校名等相關(guān)信息。

參考詞匯：share…with…;experience; interest; change; encourage; enjoy; happiness; confident

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Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

I had an experience of sharing. When my family moved, I had to go to a new school and study in a new class. The first test made me so nervous that I failed. I got worried and felt helpless until one of my new classmates came up to me and asked softly if I was OK. After I told him about my problem, he gave me some advice. From then on, we got to know each other and shared our ideas ,problems, and happiness. We became good friends. Sharing with friends helped me bring back my confidence and fit in with others.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇命題作文。在要點中給出了寫作的大致方向，需要自己發(fā)揮的地方較多。動筆前要圍繞要點組織材料，確定時態(tài)主要詞匯等問題，由于是描述自己經(jīng)歷過的事情，故時態(tài)主要是一般過去時態(tài)和現(xiàn)在完成時態(tài)，人稱是第一人稱。寫作中，應注意描述的全面性；語言的表述應該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應該符合英語的表達習慣。

【亮點說明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色.如: 時間狀語從句When my family moved, I had to go to a new school and study in a new class，so that句式，until引導的時間狀語從句，F(xiàn)rom then on等，學習中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當引用, 讓文章更出彩。