Question

3月29日是校園安全教育日，請(qǐng)你以“創(chuàng)建平安校園”為主題，根據(jù)以下三個(gè)方面的提示寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)演講稿。

How to keep safe in school
In P.E. classes	In the dining hall	In the science lab
wear sports shoes do warming up exercises …	don’t run wait in line …	keep your hands away from don’t work alone …

注意：文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名、學(xué)校名；80-100詞左右，短文開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Hello, everyone! It’s very important for us to keep safe in school.                               
                                                                                  
                                                                                  
                                                                                  
                                                                            

Answer 1

Hello, everyone! It’s very important for us to keep safe in school. We should always keep our safety issue in mind. In order to do that, we should remember the following three tips.
First, we must wear sports shoes to protect ourselves in P.E. classes. Before taking sports, it’s very necessary to do warming up exercises. And never play too much.
Second, don’t run in the dining hall， for the floor may be slippery. We should avoid bumping into people. And we should also develop a good habit of waiting in line.
Third, when you are in the science lab, make sure to keep your hands away from the chemical materials. And don’t work alone, just do as the teacher asks you.
In all, the most important thing is your own awareness. We are precious. We need safety.

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。以表格的形式給出了作文的主要內(nèi)容，我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容確定主要句子的時(shí)態(tài)，及句式等重要內(nèi)容。寫(xiě)作中注意語(yǔ)義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系。上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：做英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)時(shí)，要注意認(rèn)真審題，分析體裁，確定時(shí)態(tài)；分析內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，列出一些基本詞匯及詞組；注意表達(dá)的條理性，用好連接詞。最后，注意不要犯語(yǔ)法、句法以及搭配性錯(cuò)誤.