Question

15．每一個人，每一個國家，都擁有夢想．"中國夢"是目前最熱的話題．作為中學(xué)生，你是如何理解中國夢的？你的中國夢是什么呢？為實(shí)現(xiàn)你的夢想，你將怎么做呢？假設(shè)你叫李紅（LiHong），請以"My Dream"為題，寫一篇不少于100詞的英語短文．
要求：1．條理清楚，有表明自己觀點(diǎn)的句子．          
2．書寫工整，句式規(guī)范，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號和大小寫使用正確．
3．短文中應(yīng)盡量包括提示內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，但不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、地名．
4．參考詞匯：China dream，come true，achieve one's dreams．，give up，hold on to，make up of
MY  DREAM
Everyonehas his dreams．As young students，we have many kinds of dreams．These dreams are our China dreams The dreams can be very big，they can also be small．In fact，a bigdream is made up ofmany small dreams．
My name's Li Hong．I also have adream．I dream of becoming a great scientist．From now on，I have to study hard toachieve my dream．I must learn as much as I can．When I meet anydifficulty，I won'tgive it up，I must get it over．
I'm sure it's very important to dream，．Some dreams are more realistic，others are not．No matter what our dreams are，we should hold on to them，they can just come true one day．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
①In fact，a bigdream②is made up of  many small dreams．事實(shí)上，一個理想是由許多小的夢想組成的．
①in fact固定短語"事實(shí)上"
②be made up of  由…組成
高分句型二：
①From now on，I have to study hard②to achieve my dream．從現(xiàn)在起，我要努力學(xué)習(xí)，實(shí)現(xiàn)我的夢想．
①from now on 從現(xiàn)在開始
②動詞不定式作目的狀語

解答 One possible version：
MY  DREAM
 Everyonehas his dreams．As young students，we have many kinds of dreams．These dreams are our China dreams．The dreams can be very big，they can also be small．In fact，a bigdream is made up of  many small dreams．【高分句型一】【自己如何理解中國夢】
My name's Li Hong．I also have adream．I dream of becoming a great scientist．From now on，I have to study hard to achieve my dream．【高分句型二】I must learn as much as I can．When I meet any difficulty，I won't give it up，I must get it over．【我的中國夢是什么】
I'm sure it's very important to dream，．Some dreams are more realistic，others are not．No matter what our dreams are，we should hold on to them，they can just come true one day．【如何去實(shí)現(xiàn)】

點(diǎn)評 這是一篇給材料作文．本文給出了一些要點(diǎn)，并給出了作文的題目．我們要做的就是用正確的英語把要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象說出自己的觀點(diǎn)．動筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，要注意主謂一致等問題．寫作中要適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系．學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式 及短語，寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理．