Question

5．假如你是育英中學(xué)的劉琳，在網(wǎng)上看到一美國中學(xué)生Anna想結(jié)交中國朋友的 帖子，請你給她回帖，表示愿意成為她的朋友．
內(nèi)容包括介紹自己．（不超過三項(xiàng)）
1．為什么想和她成為朋友．
要求寫作中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和學(xué)校名稱．
2．語句通順，意思連貫，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范．
3．文章的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
4．詞數(shù)：60〜80詞．
Hi Anna，
I'm Liu Lin
I'm a student of Yuying Middle School in China．I'm kind of outgoing and good at swimming．I'd like to be your friend．Because of the same age，I think we can learn well from each other and help each other．It's also a good way for us to talk both in English and Chinese，right？And I think we can know a lot about your and my country and people．Is that what you expect？
Best wishes！
Yours，
Liu Lin．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是給Anna回帖，表示愿意成為她的朋友．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱主要為第一人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1介紹自己
2為什么想和她成為朋友
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語：
kind of 一點(diǎn)兒
be good at 擅長…
because of 因?yàn)椤?br />learn from sb 向某人學(xué)習(xí)
each other彼此
both …and…兩者都…
高分句型：
1．①Because of the same age，I think ②we can learn well from each other and help each other．
①because of表示因?yàn)椤�，of是介詞，后加名詞代詞或動(dòng)名詞．
②省略了that的賓語從句，作為think的賓語．
2．①It's also a good way for us to talk ②both in English and Chinese，③right？
①it作為形式主語，后面的動(dòng)詞不定式是真正主語．
②both …and…兩者都…連接名詞或代詞作主語時(shí)，謂語動(dòng)詞用復(fù)數(shù)形式，不受‘就近原則'的限制．如，Both Li Ming and Wei Hua are good at English．
③right？對吧？加上問號表示反問．

解答 Hi Anna，
I'm Liu Lin．I'm a student of Yuying Middle School in China．I'm kind of outgoing and good at swimming．（高分句型）（介紹自己）I'd like to be your friend．Because of the same age，I think we can learn well from each other and help each other．（高分句型）It's also a good way for us to talk both in English and Chinese，right？（高分句型）And I think we can know a lot about your and my country and people．（為什么）Is that what you expect？Best wishes!
Yours，Liu Lin

點(diǎn)評 這是一篇提綱作文．考生在把握了文章的中心后，應(yīng)在內(nèi)心構(gòu)思一個(gè)基本的框架，并考慮使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~語、短語和句型，以充分地表達(dá)文章的內(nèi)容．盡可能地充分利用所學(xué)的短語或句型來表述具體的內(nèi)容，避免使用無把握或偏、難句型．注意所寫句子要符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣