【題目】請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下中文提示,寫(xiě)一篇60-80詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文介紹的好朋友。要點(diǎn)如下:

1 李梅是我最好的朋友,她和我一樣大,她學(xué)習(xí)比我刻苦,所以她的成績(jī)比我的成績(jī)好。

2 她有許多好習(xí)慣:她總是早睡早起,每周鍛煉三到四次,每天喝牛奶,吃蔬菜。她認(rèn)為它們對(duì)她的身體有好處。

3 今年暑假,她和她的父母去了北京,參觀了長(zhǎng)城,故宮等。北京很大很漂亮,他們?cè)谀抢锿娴梅浅i_(kāi)心。她為你買了一些禮物,你非常喜歡。

注意: 1. 要求包括內(nèi)容要點(diǎn),語(yǔ)句通順,內(nèi)容連貫,不可逐條翻譯;

2. 詞數(shù) 60-80;

3. 介紹內(nèi)容的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出,不計(jì)詞數(shù)。

參考詞匯:the Great Wall, the Palace Museum

Li Mei is my best friend. __________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________

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【答案】

My Best Friend

Li Mei is my best friend. She is the same age as me. She studies much harder than I do, so she has better grades. She has lots of good habits, such as sleeping early and getting up early, doing exercise three or four times weekly and so on. She also has a good eating habit. For example, she drinks milk and eats vegetables every day. She thinks it’s good for her health. Beijing is a big and beautiful city. So Li Mei went there with her parents this summer. In Beijing, they visited The Great Wall and The Summer Palace. They had a great time in Beijing. And she bought me a present , I liked it very much. I think we are good friends forever.

【解析】

試題分析:這篇作文要求我們根據(jù)所給信息,來(lái)介紹一下自己的朋友Li Mei。題目中有關(guān)于Li Mei的具體信息,我們應(yīng)用正確的英語(yǔ)將這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。這些信息包括了Li Mei的年齡、習(xí)慣、愛(ài)好她的暑假等,寫(xiě)作時(shí),我們可以根據(jù)需要將這些信息進(jìn)行重新整理和安排,使文章的意思銜接更自然。而且這些關(guān)于介紹人物時(shí)所使用的詞匯和句型,是學(xué)生們比較熟悉的,所以將平時(shí)的積累發(fā)揮出來(lái)就可以。當(dāng)然我們要盡量使用一些好的句型和連詞,使文章上下文意思連貫,更出彩。

寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn):這是一篇非常優(yōu)秀的作文,短文中作者按照題目的要求,給我們介紹了自己的好朋友Li Mei,結(jié)構(gòu)清晰,要點(diǎn)全面。而且作者在寫(xiě)作時(shí),并不是完全按照題目中給出的順序,逐句翻譯的,而是將這些信息進(jìn)行了整合,讓意思關(guān)聯(lián)緊密的放在一起表達(dá),這一點(diǎn)很好。短文中的語(yǔ)言合乎英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)規(guī)范,而且作者還使用了一些較好的句式,增強(qiáng)了文章的連貫性。如比較級(jí)句式She studies much harder than I do.、固定短語(yǔ)getting up early和doing exercise.、介詞短語(yǔ)with her parents.、連詞So Li Mei went there with her parents this summer.等。

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