Question

三年快樂而充實的初中生活結(jié)束了，你將進入高中(中職)學(xué)校學(xué)習(xí)。展望未來，你對高中(中職)生活充滿期待。請以“I Expect My School Life”為題，寫一篇80詞左右的短文。文章的開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

要求：（1）內(nèi)容要點：①生活、學(xué)習(xí)環(huán)境(餐廳，圖書館，運動場……)；②師生、同學(xué)關(guān)系；

③生活多彩、學(xué)業(yè)進步；④補充一點自己的想法。

（2）文章不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名和學(xué)校名稱；要點齊全，語言通順，意思連貫，書寫規(guī)范，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

（3）提示詞：get along with；colorful(adj.)；knowledge；habit

I Expect My School Life

I will study in a high school soon. Everything is new to me. ____________________________

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

One possible version: （118 words）

I Expect My School Life

I will study in a high school soon. Everything is new to me.

I hope my school is big and clean with a large dinning room. And the library is full of different kinds of books. So I can read them in my spare time. I can get along well with my teachers and classmates. I can help each other with my classmates. At the same time, I expect my school life is colorful, after class I can listen to music, play chess and basketball. To get more useful knowledge or information, I can surf the Internet. I will keep a good eating habit. Do exercise often to stay in good spirits. Try my best to make great progress.

As long as I stick to it, I can achieve my dream.

【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，題目中給出的材料較為齊全。動筆前應(yīng)根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容組織語言，列出簡單提綱，確定句子的時態(tài)，關(guān)鍵單詞等問題。寫作中注意將以前的自己和現(xiàn)在的自己介紹清楚，并介紹一下自己的愿望。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)和將來時態(tài)，注意時態(tài)和主謂一致等問題。寫作中注意使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。