18.你們學(xué)校最近就"一個(gè)好朋友的標(biāo)準(zhǔn)"做了一次問(wèn)卷調(diào)查,調(diào)查結(jié)果如下圖.請(qǐng)你以"What a good friend should be like"為題,用英語(yǔ)為你們學(xué)校的校報(bào)寫(xiě)一篇短文,報(bào)道此次調(diào)查結(jié)果并談?wù)勛约旱目捶ǎ?br />
注意:1.詞數(shù):80-100(開(kāi)頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))
2.內(nèi)容須包括以上要點(diǎn),可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;
3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和人名.
What a good friend should be like
Recently,we did a survey in our school on what a good friend should be like.About seven percent of the students prefer their friends should be beautiful or handsome.About nearly half of the students think that their friends should be hardworking and good at their lessons.Sixty-seven percent of the students hope their friends should be fond of singing and dancing,and also they should be good at sports.Almost all of the students agree that their friends should be not only lively,kind and helpful but also honest.Good friends should trust each other and share joys.I think to be honest is the most important for us all..

分析 這是一篇提綱作文.內(nèi)容是以"What a good friend should be like"為題,針對(duì)一個(gè)好朋友的標(biāo)準(zhǔn)的問(wèn)卷調(diào)查結(jié)果談?wù)効捶ǎ畷r(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí).人稱(chēng)主要為第三人稱(chēng)輔以第一人稱(chēng).
寫(xiě)作思路:考生需要首先審清主題,圍繞主題展開(kāi)作文.
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開(kāi)作文,即本文的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn):
1.調(diào)查結(jié)果:7%的學(xué)生認(rèn)為是外表漂亮英俊
48%的學(xué)生認(rèn)為是學(xué)習(xí)勤奮功課好
67的學(xué)生認(rèn)為是%喜歡唱歌運(yùn)動(dòng)
95%的學(xué)生認(rèn)為是心地善良,樂(lè)于助人,待人誠(chéng)實(shí)
2.自己的看法
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ):
be good at擅長(zhǎng)
be fond of 喜歡…
be honest 誠(chéng)實(shí)的
not only…but also…不僅…而且…,
高分句型:
1.Almost all of the students agree①that their friends should be②not only lively,kind and helpful but also honest.
①agree后所接的由that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句.that可以省略.
②not only…but also…不僅…而且…,連接兩個(gè)對(duì)等成分,這里是連接一組形容詞,和be構(gòu)成系表結(jié)構(gòu).
2.I think①②to be honest is the most important for us all.
①think后接的是省略了引導(dǎo)詞that的賓語(yǔ)從句.
②to be honest動(dòng)詞不定式做主語(yǔ),謂語(yǔ)用單數(shù)is.

解答 Recently,we did a survey in our school on what a good friend should be like.(點(diǎn)題)About seven percent of the students prefer their friends should be beautiful or handsome.(7%的學(xué)生認(rèn)為是外表漂亮英俊)About  nearly half of the students think that their friends should be hardworking and good at their lessons.(48%的學(xué)生認(rèn)為是學(xué)習(xí)勤奮功課好)Sixty-seven percent of the students hope their friends should be fond of singing and dancing,and also they should be good at sports.(67的學(xué)生認(rèn)為是%喜歡唱歌運(yùn)動(dòng)) Almost all of the students agree that their friends should be not only lively,kind and helpful but also honest.(高分句型) (95%的學(xué)生認(rèn)為是心地善良,樂(lè)于助人,待人誠(chéng)實(shí))Good friends should trust each other and share joys.I think to be honest is the most important for us all.(高分句型)(自己的看法)

點(diǎn)評(píng) 這是一篇給材料作文.本文給出了一些要點(diǎn),并給出了作文的開(kāi)頭.我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái),并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象說(shuō)出自己的觀點(diǎn).動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料,不要遺漏要點(diǎn),并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮.根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)來(lái)寫(xiě),要注意主謂一致等問(wèn)題.寫(xiě)作中要適當(dāng)使用連詞,注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密,符合邏輯關(guān)系.學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理.

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