Question

【題目】書面表達

你班Carl同學最近遇到了一些問題，希望得到一些建議和幫助。請你以Mr. Friend的身份給Carl寫封信，針對Carl的所有問題提出一些有益的建議。

注意事項：1.不得出現(xiàn)學校和本人真實姓名。

2．下列表格中的內容不得遺漏。

3．字數(shù)：90左右。

Carl

A Grade 9 student

Be crazy about basketball

Have lots of homework

Stay up late

Low marks in exams

Feel stressed

Dear Carl,

I've learned about your problems. I hope I can help you._____________________

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_____________________________________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________________________________

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Best wishes,

Mr. Friend

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Carl,

I've learned about your problems. I hope I can help you. You are a Grade student, so you are busy every day. You must have lots of homework, but you are crazy about basketball. You spend a lot of time playing basketball. Like this, you will find you are tired. You should give up it . You don’t stay up late. If you make low marks in exams, you will feel stressed. You should talk about this to your parents or your best friends. They can help you. Please work hard to get good marks. I believe you will go to high school.

Best wishes,

Mr. Friend

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示認真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。運用適當?shù)亩陶Z表達中心思想，增加作文的可讀性。完成提示詞時也要符合事實。溫馨提醒：考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。

【亮點說明】這篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少。學習中注意總結,牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當引用,使文章的表達更有邏輯性,更富有條理。