Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)。（15分）

假如你叫王雷，是第一中學(xué)的學(xué)生會(huì)主席。在報(bào)紙和電視上看到有關(guān)報(bào)道，由于伊拉克戰(zhàn)爭(zhēng)，導(dǎo)致許多兒童失學(xué)，生活狀況窘迫，許多孩子淪為童工，處境很悲慘，所以打算給全校的學(xué)生發(fā)一份倡議書，號(hào)召他們奉獻(xiàn)愛心去幫助那些孩子們。(10分)

提示: warm houses, smile on one’s face, community service, go to school, rich, end the war, live a happy life, the war on Iraq

Answer 1

【答案】Hello, everyone. As we know, Many Iraqis become homeless people because of the war. Some of them are children. Some used to be rich but now they lose warm houses and have not enough food to eat. The children have no chance to go to school. The hard living conditions make the homeless children become child laborers. What do you think of their terrible life?

Let’s make a wonderful program to help these children live a normal life. I think we should call on (呼吁) ending the war. We support these poor child laborers by raising money. So they can live in warm houses, get good educations and live happy lives. We hope there will be smiles on their faces. If you’d like to join the program, please come to our community.

【解析】試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文給出了一些要點(diǎn)，并提示了一些詞語(yǔ)。我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象說出自己的觀點(diǎn)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)來寫，要注意主謂一致等問題。寫作中要適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文多次使用連接詞and以及主從復(fù)合句如We hope there will be smiles on their faces.（我們希望他們的臉上會(huì)有笑容0。If you’d like to join the program, please come to our community. (如果你想?yún)⒓舆@個(gè)節(jié)目，請(qǐng)來到我們的社區(qū))，這些都為文章增色不少。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理。