Question

【題目】書面表達。（共15分）

很多人認為當今的中學生有自己鮮明的特點。他們多才多藝，擅長琴棋書畫；同時也常常以自我為中心，很少為他人著想。作為中學生，你認為自己最大的優(yōu)點是什么？（請舉例說明），缺點是什么？（請舉例說明）。你應(yīng)該如何揚長避短，做最好的自己？

要求：1．詞數(shù)80左右。 文章標題和開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

2．短文中不要出現(xiàn)你的真實姓名和學校。

3．注意不要遺漏要點。

It’s said that the middle school students today have their own strong points and weak points．

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Answer 1

【答案】

It is said that the middle school students today have their own strong points and weak points. They are good at many things, for example, music, drawing, sports. But they are also thought to be selfish. They often think about themselves.

I have many advantages and I think the biggest is that I am willing to help others. I remember once I played basketball with my friends. Suddenly, one of my friends fell and was hurt. I sent him to hospital at once.

Of course I have many disadvantages. I don’t work hard at my studies and always play computer games. So I am not good at my subjects. My teacher said to me I was clever, but I didn’t put my heart into it. I know my disadvantages. So I want correct them. I think I can overcome my shortcomings. I will work hard at my lessons and try to make progress.

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示認真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。本文主要描述當代中學生的特點和舉例說明作為中學生自己的優(yōu)點和缺點，因此一般現(xiàn)在時（當代中學生的特點）和一般過去時（舉例說明）運用較多。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。當然，寫作時尤要注意文章結(jié)構(gòu)的合理，表述的條理性和準確性。

溫馨提醒：考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。

寫作亮點：該范文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，要點全面，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫。尤為突出之處在短語和句子的巧妙運用，如It is said that；be good at；be willing to；Suddenly, one of my friends fell and was hurt. I sent him to hospital at once.；I will work hard at my lessons and try to make progress.等這些短語和句子的運用也讓文章增色不少。學習中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當引用，使文章的表達更有邏輯性,更富有條理。