Question

【題目】英國(guó)某中學(xué)邀請(qǐng)你校學(xué)生代表團(tuán)于7月中旬去訪問(wèn)交流，假如你是成員之一，請(qǐng)?zhí)崆皽?zhǔn)備一份英文答謝辭。

提示：

1、感謝邀請(qǐng)和接待；

2、希望在文化習(xí)俗，創(chuàng)新與發(fā)明方面有交流；

3、重點(diǎn)介紹一個(gè)中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日；

4、邀請(qǐng)他們來(lái)日照。

要求：

1.根據(jù)內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

2.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和校名；

3.詞數(shù)90左右。（開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）

參考詞匯：創(chuàng)新innovation 接待 reception

Ladies and gentlemen，

Good evening! It’s really a great honor for me to speak here.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

That’s all. Thank you!

Answer 1

【答案】Ladies and gentlemen，

Good evening! It’s really a great honor for me to speak here. I extremely appreciate your invitation and reception.

To start with , I sincerely hope more chances will be given to exchange our culture, customs, innovations and inventions in the near future. What’s more, it’s known that China possesses a long historical culture standing. Therefore, a lot of festivals are celebrated, among which the Mid-Autumn Festival is a great importance. It is regarded as a symbol of family reunion and usually celebrated in the middle of autumn. On that day, all the family members get together and enjoy delicious moon cakes while enjoying the moon. Children usually ask their parents to tell the story of Chang’e. Finally, I warmly welcome all of you to Rizhao, a young and modern city.

That’s all. Thank you!

【解析】

這是一篇答謝辭，時(shí)態(tài)上應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，要點(diǎn)要包括1、感謝邀請(qǐng)和接待；2、希望在文化習(xí)俗，創(chuàng)新與發(fā)明方面有交流；3、重點(diǎn)介紹一個(gè)中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日；4、邀請(qǐng)他們來(lái)日照。

亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，主謂一致，在文中使用了主語(yǔ)從句，定語(yǔ)從句，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如It’s known that…，a symbol of，get together等。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，句子通順，行文連貫。