Question

假如你是林莉，你的美國筆友湯姆給你發(fā)了一封電子郵件，他想了解中國父母跟孩子的關系和美國有什么不同。請根據(jù)提示內容給他回一封郵件。
提示：
1.中國父母不習慣對孩子說“我愛你”等親昵話，而美國父母則經常用言語表達對孩子的愛。
2.中國孩子對父母不能直呼名字，而在美國這是可以接受的事情。
3中國父母習慣照顧孩子到很大，而美國父母大多鼓勵孩子獨立做事。
要求：
1.郵件包含所有的提示信息；2.意思連貫，語句通順；3.詞數(shù)要求：80---100詞。（郵件的開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）   提示詞：acceptable.接受的；independently.獨立地
Dear Tom,
I am glad to receive your e-mail. The relationship between parents and children in China is different from that in America.___________________________________________________
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Yours,
Lin Li

Answer 1

Dear Tom,
I am glad to receive your e-mail. The relationship between parents and children in China is different from that in America.American parents often express their love to their children with the words in daily life, while the Chinese parents are not used to speak so directly, such as the word" I love you'’ to their children. And also the Chinese children can not call the name of the parents, compared with in USA, this is acceptable.  Chinese parents often take care the children until they graduate from the high school or the university, But in USA, most of the parents just encourage the children to be confident and work independently.
Yours，
Lin Li

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。要求根據(jù)所給提示寫一封電子郵件。本文所給材料比較詳細，并且給出了具體要求，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內容表達出來。動筆前要認真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點，并適當發(fā)揮。注意時態(tài)與時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關系。
【亮點說明】這篇文章語言規(guī)范，敘事清楚，詞匯及時態(tài)運用正確，能夠把提示的內容敘述清楚，語句通順，意思連貫是一篇不錯的文章。