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3．近期，我國(guó)一名中學(xué)生隨父母旅游時(shí)，在埃及一著名景點(diǎn)文物上刻寫"××到此一游"，此事經(jīng)媒體曝光后，在國(guó)內(nèi)引起極大反響．作為一名中學(xué)生，你就"如何文明旅游"這一話題，談?wù)勛约旱目捶ǎ?br />提示：1、旅游中不文明的陋習(xí)，如…；
2、文明意識(shí)和行為，如…；
3、詞數(shù)80左右（首句已給出，不計(jì)算在總詞數(shù)之內(nèi)）．
Nowadays，traveling is becoming a more and more important part of our life．But some travelers have some bad behaviors and habits while visiting some places of interest．Some make noises in public places．Others throw rubbish and write or draw everywhere and so on．As a middle school student，I think we should pay attention to our behaviors．For example，throw rubbish into dustbins and don't write or draw on the relics．Don't make noises in public places．We'd better follow guides and obey orders．At the same time，we should not only protect natural environment but also respect local customs and traditions．．

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分析 本題是提綱作文，對(duì)一起熱點(diǎn)網(wǎng)絡(luò)事件中的不文明行為就"如何文明旅游"這一話題發(fā)表看法．故寫作要點(diǎn)：1列舉不文明行為．2．我的看法和文明行為，同時(shí)注意自己是中國(guó)人，要自覺(jué)的維護(hù)自己國(guó)家的形象．結(jié)合材料可知這篇短文使用的人稱主要是第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，動(dòng)筆前可以按照材料內(nèi)容列出簡(jiǎn)單提綱，寫出關(guān)鍵單詞．寫作中注意語(yǔ)義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系．上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞．
重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)和句型：make noises 制造噪音
throw rubbish 扔垃圾
pay attention to 注意
had better do sth最后做某事
at the same time 同時(shí)
not only…but also不僅…而且…
At the same time，we should not only protect natural environment but also respect local customs and traditions．同時(shí)，我們不僅應(yīng)該保護(hù)自然環(huán)境而且要尊重當(dāng)?shù)氐膫鹘y(tǒng)習(xí)俗．

解答 答案：Nowadays，traveling is becoming a more and more important part of our life．But some travelers have some bad behaviors and habits while visiting some places of interest．Some make noises in public places．Others throw rubbish and write or draw everywhere and so on．（不文明行為）As a middle school student，I think we should pay attention to our behaviors．For example，throw rubbish into dustbins and don't write or draw on the relics．Don't make noises in public places．We'd better follow guides and obey orders（高分句型）．At the same time，we should not only protect natural environment but also respect local customs and traditions（我的看法以及一些文明行為）（高分句型）．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 此類作為首先要做的就是認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不能跑題偏題．寫作中注意一些基礎(chǔ)的寫作常識(shí)，不犯低級(jí)錯(cuò)誤．只要平時(shí)積累足夠，就一定能獲得滿意的分?jǐn)?shù)．另外可以有選擇的背誦一些范文，這樣應(yīng)考時(shí)就會(huì)有的放矢．