Question

16．假設(shè)Bill是你的同學(xué)，請介紹一下他的相關(guān)情況：
1、一名來自于澳大利亞的學(xué)生，會唱歌、拉小提琴，所以想?yún)⒓右魳肪銟凡浚?br />2、每天早晨6：30起床，乘校車上學(xué)，路上通�；ò雮�(gè)小時(shí)；
3、喜歡動(dòng)物，如老虎、熊貓、貓等，他認(rèn)為貓友好、聰明，熊貓可愛；
4、喜歡看電視，經(jīng)常幫助他媽媽做家務(wù)活．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
He thinks cats are friendly and smart他認(rèn)為貓很友好聰明．
think后是省略that的賓語從句．
【高分句型二】
It takes him about half an hour to get to school by bus乘坐校車上學(xué)花大約半個(gè)小時(shí)．
it takes sb+時(shí)間+to do sth 某人花多少時(shí)間做某事．

解答 This is my good friend．His name is Bill．He is 14 years old．He can sing and play the violin．And he is good at them．So he wants to join the music club．（一名來自于澳大利亞的學(xué)生，會唱歌、拉小提琴，所以想?yún)⒓右魳肪銟凡浚〣ill loves animals．He thinks cats are friendly and smart．【高分句型一】Pandas are cute．（喜歡動(dòng)物，如老虎、熊貓、貓等，他認(rèn)為貓友好、聰明，熊貓可愛；）They are our friends．Bill gets up at 6 o'clock in the morning．It takes him about half an hour to get to school by bus【高分句型二】．（每天早晨6：30起床，乘校車上學(xué)，路上通�；ò雮�(gè)小時(shí)；）He likes watching TV．He is hard-working and he often helps his mum with housework．（喜歡看電視，經(jīng)常幫助他媽媽做家務(wù)活．）

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