Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

學(xué)校正在選舉美德少年（Virtue Teenager）。假如你是王彥，你想推薦你的同學(xué)劉佳當(dāng)選學(xué)校的美德少年，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)所給提示，用英文寫一份推薦信。

姓名	劉佳
年齡	15歲
性格	善良，樂于助人（上周六，她在博物館幫助一個(gè)小男孩找到媽媽。）
愿望	將來（in the future）想當(dāng)一名醫(yī)生(doctor)，幫助更多的人。
其它情況	1. 就讀于七（4）班。 2. 對(duì)自己要求嚴(yán)格；每天堅(jiān)持鍛煉。 3. 在周末經(jīng)常照顧年邁的爺爺。

要求：

1．80詞左右，信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

2．語句通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，字跡工整。

3．內(nèi)容必須包括上表中的要點(diǎn)，不要逐字翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

Dear Sir or Madam,

I would like to recommend( 推薦) Liu Jia for the Virtue Teenager.

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So I think Liu Jia is our best choice(選擇), I hope you’ll agree with me.

Yours

Wang Yan

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,

I would like to recommend( 推薦) Liu Jia for the virtue teenager.

Liu Jia is 15 years old, she studies in Class 4, Grade 7. She is always strict with herself. She studies hard and exercises every morning, so she is good at study and sports. She is also a kind girl, she often helps others. Last Saturday, a little boy couldn’t find his mother in the museum, she helped him find his mother. And she often looks after her old grandfather on weekends. She wants to be a doctor in the future, because she wants to help more people.

So I think Liu Jia is our best choice(選擇), I hope you’ll agree with me.

Yours

Wang Yan

【解析】

這是一篇給材料作文，我想推薦我的同學(xué)劉佳當(dāng)選學(xué)校的美德少年，寫一份推薦信。

這是一篇給材料作文，介紹我和我的朋友。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：I would like to recommend……，Liu Jia is……，She wants to be……，So I think……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。