Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)(15分)

假設(shè)你是Lucy，你將去某城市旅游。你從網(wǎng)上獲得了Sunshine Hotel的部分信息。請你寫一封電子郵件給該賓館的經(jīng)理，介紹你的行程并咨詢?nèi)缦孪嚓P(guān)細(xì)節(jié)：

1. How far is the hotel from the airport?

2. How can you get to the hotel?

3. Do they offer free breakfast?

4. Is there a discount(折扣) for a long stay?

要求：

1. 覆蓋要點(diǎn)，請補(bǔ)充合理的細(xì)節(jié)；

2. 語句通順，書寫工整；

3. 80詞左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Sir,

My family is planning a holiday to your city. I got some information about your hotel, but I still have some questions to ask. Would you be kind enough to reply to my e-mail?

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir,

My family is planning a holiday to your city. I got some information about your hotel, but I still have some questions to ask. Would you be kind enough to reply to my e-mail?

We are arriving in your city on October 1st. And we plan to stay in your hotel for 5 days. Would you tell me how far your hotel is from the airport? And we’d like to know how we can get to your hotel. Also, we wonder whether you offer free breakfast. Last but not least, would you mind telling us whether there is a discount for a long stay?

Thanks for your time. I’m looking forward to your reply.

【解析】試題分析：這是一篇材料作文。在要點(diǎn)中給出了寫作的大致方向，結(jié)合要點(diǎn)展開即可。根據(jù)要求可知寫作主要內(nèi)容是以電子郵件的形式介紹行程并咨詢相關(guān)信息。所以時(shí)態(tài)主要是一般將來時(shí)。寫作中，注意電子郵件的格式，咨詢的語氣。注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇短文內(nèi)容涵蓋了題目要求的所有要點(diǎn)，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，意思連貫，符合邏輯。在文章的結(jié)構(gòu)組織上很好地使用了簡單句和復(fù)合句，使文章脈絡(luò)清晰、自然流暢。同時(shí)，使用了一些常用的句式和短語，如：plan to do、Would you tell me ---、we’d like to know ---、we wonder whether ---、would you mind---、 look forward to等，這為文章增色不少。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意積累，掌握一些常用句式及短語，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理。