Question

根據(jù)下表所列內(nèi)容，寫一篇文章介紹你的筆友張平，并根據(jù)他的困惑給他提一些建議。要點表達要全，可適當發(fā)揮。字數(shù)100字左右。

	出生日期	1997年8月23日
基本	星座	Virgo
情況	個性	謙虛，實事求是，注重細節(jié)。
愛好	酷愛足球，熱愛大自然，加入Birdwatching Club兩年了
	學習	作業(yè)多，想考高分，壓力大。
困惑	情感	父母整天忙于工作，不時感到孤獨。
	穿白色衣服，因為……
建議	使用黃色文具復(fù)習迎考，因為……
多與家人朋友……

Zhang Ping is my pen friend. He_______________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

 

.  Zhang Ping is my pen friend. He was born on August 23, 1997. He is a Virgo. Zhang Ping is a modest person. He’s practical and pays attention to details. He has many hobbies. He is crazy about playing football. He also loves nature. He has been in the Birdwatching Club for 2 years. However, as a Grade 9 student, he has some problems. He has too much homework to do. He feels stressed because he wants to get high marks in exams. What’s more, his parents are busy working all day and have no time for him, so he feels lonely from time to time.

    I want to offer Zhang Ping some advice. When he feels stressed , he should wear white, because white can make him feel calm and peaceful. When he study for exams, he can use yellow stationery, because yellow is the colour of wisdom. When he feels lonely, he can have communication with his family or friends and share his worries with them. I hope my advice will be of great value to him.

【解析】

試題分析：本文是人物簡介，給出一定的漢語提示。給考生發(fā)揮的余地 較大。對于考生的綜合能力較高，要求考生有很強的謀篇布局的的能力和組織要點的能力。首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在自己能力范圍內(nèi)，選擇句式要賦予變化，這樣才能證明你能更好的駕馭。同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點組織成一個整體。最后要注意使用高級詞匯與高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。因為是人物介紹，故時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時較好，注意人稱的轉(zhuǎn)換

【亮點說明】本文出現(xiàn)一些比較覺的短語，如pay attention to 注意，be crazy about 對，，瘋狂著迷。Be busy doing 忙于做某事。Share sth with sb 與某人分享某事。He has too much homework to do 他有很多功課要做，考查 have sth to do 有事要做。He feels stressed because he wants to get high marks in exams， 因為想取得好的分數(shù)故感覺很有壓力，feel stress 感到壓力。I hope my advice will be of great value to him.， 我希望我的建議對你有所幫助，提到 be of +抽象名詞等于be + adj 。本文還出現(xiàn)一些高級詞匯如stressed marks  advice communication  value， 為文章增色不少。 文中還出現(xiàn)一些連詞如because ,what’s more, however 使文章流暢，邏輯分明。

考點： 提綱類作文。