Question

3．無論在學�；蚣彝�，都有許多針對青少年的規(guī)則（rules），請寫一篇80詞以上的短文，分別談談你最贊同和最反感的一兩條，同時說說自己對這些規(guī)則的看法或改進建議．內容要求：
1．介紹一兩條你最贊同的規(guī)則，并陳述理由；
2．介紹一兩條你最反感的規(guī)則，并提出改進建議．
3．對規(guī)則的利弊做一個簡單的小結．
注意：短文中不允許出現(xiàn)與考生本人相關的真實姓名和校名等信息．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內容談談你最贊同和最反感的一兩條規(guī)則．時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時．人稱主要為第三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．其次考生可從三方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：1．介紹一兩條你最贊同的規(guī)則，并陳述理由；
2．介紹一兩條你最反感的規(guī)則，并提出改進建議．
3．對規(guī)則的利弊做一個簡單的小結．
常用到的重點句型和短語：
help sb do sth 幫助某人做某事
focus on 專注于
as for 至于
in one's opinion 依某人看來
too…to do sth 太…而不能…
參考句子：
They are very helpful for us to make fewer mistakes when we are too young to know how to do right．
本句中的when引導的是時間狀語從句，其中too…to do sth表示太…而不能…．
But it would be better for teachers or parents often to sit down and listen to our opinions about rules，so that they can be always effective and accepted by us．
句中是it 作為形式主語，動詞不定式做真正主語的應用，so that引導的是結果狀語從句，they can be always effective and accepted by us．是被動語態(tài)的運用．

解答 We have many rules in our school．Some are good for us，I think，but others are not．For example，we are required to wear school uniforms every day．It helps us have an easy life without too much attention to dress and appearance，so we can just focus on our school work．（贊同的規(guī)則）However，as for"It's not allowed to bring mobile phones to school"，I don't think it's a good rule．．（不贊同的規(guī)則）Nowadays we are in IT generation，and mobile phones are really necessary in everyday lives even though for teenagers．In my opinion，the rule can be changed a little like this"It's not allowed to use mobile phones in class．（改進建議）
We do need some rules both in schools or families．They are very helpful for us to make fewer mistakes when we are too young to know how to do right．（高分句型）But it would be better for teachers or parents often to sit down and listen to our opinions about rules，so that they can be always effective and accepted by us．（高分句型）（利弊總結）

點評 本文是一篇給材料作文，寫作時先要圍繞這些要點組織材料，確定寫作內容，注意將這些要點全部表達出來，并且要有適當?shù)陌l(fā)揮，在談到自己的觀點時，要結合活動內容，寫出自己的觀點．