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7．中學(xué)生在成長過程中經(jīng)常會(huì)碰到一些煩惱．假設(shè)你是李華，請根據(jù)下表提示，用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿，在班會(huì)上談?wù)勀阌龅降臒�惱以及你自己的做法�?br />

你的煩惱	你的做法
個(gè)頭不高，相貌平常	不必在意，相信自己
父母不理解，朋友少	學(xué)會(huì)溝通，友善待人
學(xué)習(xí)壓力大，課外活動(dòng)少	…（自主發(fā)揮，至少兩點(diǎn)）

要求：1．詞數(shù)100左右．開頭及結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)．
2．所寫內(nèi)容必須包括表格中所有的信息，并作適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮．
3．不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名、地名等相關(guān)信息．A．B．C．D．

Hello everyone，
I am Li Hua．I'd like to talk about my problems and how I deal with them．
．I am not very tall and very common．But I don't care and I believe in myself．
My parents don't understand me and I have very few friends．I encourage myself to be kind to others and learn to communicate with others very well．
I often feel stressed because of my study and I don't have many chances to join the after-class activities．I will plan my time very carefully and improve my study in a very good way．Try to join as many activities as possible and achieve a balance between study and hobbies．
That's all．Thank you!

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容是談?wù)勀阌龅降臒�惱以及你自己的做法．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱主要為第一人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1．你的煩惱；個(gè)頭不高，相貌平常，父母不理解，朋友少，學(xué)習(xí)壓力大，課外活動(dòng)少
2．你的做法；不必在意，相信自己，學(xué)會(huì)溝通，友善待人…（自擬兩點(diǎn)）

常用到的重點(diǎn)短語：
encourage sb to do sth鼓勵(lì)某人做某事
communicate with sb 與某人交流
because of 因?yàn)?br />try to do sth 盡力做某事
believe in 相信
【高分句型】
1．I ①encourage myself to②be kind to others and ③learn to ④communicate with others very well．
①encourage sb to do sth鼓勵(lì)某人做某事
②be kind to sb 對某人友好
③learn to do sth 學(xué)會(huì)做某事
④communicate with sb 與某人交流
2．I often feel stressed①because of my study and I don't have many chances②to join the after-class activities．
①because of 因?yàn)椋畂f是介詞后加名詞代詞動(dòng)名詞．
②動(dòng)詞不定式做目的狀語．
3．Try to join ①as many activities as possible and achieve a balance②between study and hobbies．
①as…as possible 盡可能…
②between …and…兩者之間

解答 Hello everyone，
I am Li Hua．I'd like to talk about my problems and how I deal with them．I am not very tall and very common．But I don't care and I believe in myself．（個(gè)頭不高，相貌平常--不必在意，相信自己）
My parents don't understand me and I have very few friends．I encourage myself to be kind to others and learn to communicate with others very well．【高分句型】（父母不理解，朋友少--學(xué)會(huì)溝通，友善待人）
I often feel stressed because of my study and I don't have many chances to join the after-class activities．【高分句型】I will plan my time very carefully and improve my study in a very good way．Try to join as many activities as possible and achieve a balance between study and hobbies．【高分句型】（學(xué)習(xí)壓力大，課外活動(dòng)少-注意學(xué)習(xí)方法，多參加課外活動(dòng)）
That's all．Thank you!

點(diǎn)評 這是一篇圖表作文．是談?wù)勀阌龅降臒�惱以及你自己的做法，時(shí)態(tài)比較單一，考生在把握了文章的中心后，應(yīng)在內(nèi)心構(gòu)思一個(gè)基本的框架，并考慮使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~語、短語和句型，以充分地表達(dá)文章的內(nèi)容．盡可能地充分利用所學(xué)的短語或句型來表述具體的內(nèi)容，避免使用無把握或偏、難句型．注意所寫句子要符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣