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11．成長中每個人都要面對煩惱，并解決問題．假設(shè)你叫李華，是美國中學(xué)生艾麗絲的朋友．你收到了她的電子郵件，請給她回復(fù)，回答她的問題，提出你的建議，并就此事談?wù)勀愕目捶ǎ?br />

Hi!Li Hua， I am very upset and I need your help．I didn't get on well with my best friend．I'm very worried because I have few friends．I don't want to lose her．What should I do？Do you have the same problem？ I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon． Yours， Alice

Hi!Alice， I'm glad to hear from you．Yes，I sometimes have the same problem． If you don't want to lose your best friend，you should talk with her．Tell her what you think and your feelings．You can help each other and do the things together that you are interested in．You'd better learn how to get along well with your friends．I think communicating will make you become good friends again．A friend is a present which you give yourself． I hope what I said can help you． Yours， Li Hua

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分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容是給好友艾麗絲的回信，針對她說的不能和朋友好好相處的問題，提出你的建議，并就此事談?wù)勀愕目捶ǎ�注意信件的格式．時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時．人稱主要為第一、二人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
1．艾麗絲與朋友相處不好，你有同樣的情況嗎？
2．提出建議；
常用到的重點短語：
talk with sb 與某人交談
be interested in 對…感興趣
had better do sth 最好做某事
get along with sb 與某人相處
【高分句型】
1．If you don't want to lose your best friend，you should talk with her．
if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句，主句含有情態(tài)動詞should，從句用一般現(xiàn)在時．
2．You can help each other and do the things together that you are interested in．
that作為關(guān)系詞的定語從句，that作為從句的賓語，修飾先行詞things
3．I think①②communicating will make you become good friends again．
①think后是省略了引導(dǎo)詞that的賓語從句．
②動名詞做主語．

解答 Hi!Alice，
   I'm glad to hear from you．
   Yes，I sometimes have the same problem．（我也有同樣的情況）
   If you don't want to lose your best friend，you should talk with her．【高分句型】Tell her what you think and your feelings．You can help each other and do the things together that you are interested in．【高分句型】You'd better learn how to get along well with your friends．I think communicating will make you become good friends again．【高分句型】A friend is a present which you give yourself．（提出建議）
I hope what I said can help you．
Yours，
Li Hua

點評 這是一篇應(yīng)用文寫作，寫一封回信．本題材料主要是一封來信，故動筆前一定要認真閱讀來信．在回信中對涉及的問題都要有所回應(yīng)．根據(jù)內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱主要為一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．寫作中注意標點符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤．注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫．