Question

9．隨著手機(jī)的普及，中學(xué)生玩手機(jī)的現(xiàn)象也變得相當(dāng)普遍．你經(jīng)常低頭玩手機(jī)嗎？知道其中的危害嗎？對經(jīng)常玩手機(jī)的"低頭族（phubber）"，你有什么話要對他們說嗎？就你看到的現(xiàn)象發(fā)表看法．
參考詞匯：chat on Wechat or QQ，be bad for，get in the way of，stop doing
要求：1．詞數(shù)：110詞；
2．內(nèi)容必須包括你的想法及建議，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
3．條理清楚，語句連貫，書寫規(guī)范；
4．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的地名、校名和人名．
As is shown in the drawing，at the family party，the children as well as their parents are just fixing their eyes on phone screens，leaving the old grandparents sighing alone．Nowadays we spend too much time on the electric screen．It's really bad for us．First of all，it has a bad influence on our eyes．Also，it affects our study and work because of playing with cell phones．What's worse，we are so trapped in the virtual world that we may lose the ability to communicate with others face to face．
I think it is time for us to stop phubbing．We should do more sports in our free time．It's also a good way to read books to open up our eyes．Do remember to talk with our parents and grandparents instead of chatting with strangers online．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
①I think it is time for us to stop phubbing．我認(rèn)為到我們該停止低頭看手機(jī)的時(shí)候了．I think后面跟的是賓語從句，it is time for sb to do sth到某人該做某事的時(shí)候了，后面跟to引導(dǎo)的不定式短語，stop doing sth停止做某事，注意與stop to do sth的區(qū)別．
②Nowadays we spend too much time on the electric screens．現(xiàn)在我們在電子屏幕上花了太多的時(shí)間．spend…on 花費(fèi)時(shí)間或金錢做某事，on后面直接跟名詞形式，too much太多，修飾不可數(shù)名詞形式．

解答 As is shown in the drawing，at the family party，the children as well as their parents are just fixing their eyes on phone screens，leaving the old grandparents sighing alone．（引出一種社會現(xiàn)象"低頭族 （phubbers）"）
Nowadays we spend too much time on the electric screens（高分句型）．It's really bad for us．First of all，it has a bad influence on our eyes．Also，it affects our study and work because of playing with cell phones．What's worse，we are so trapped in the virtual world that we may lose the ability to communicate with others face to face．（對低頭族現(xiàn)象的看法）     
I think it is time for us to stop phubbing（高分句型）．We should do more sports in our free time．It's also a good way to read books to open up our eyes．Do remember to talk with our parents and grandparents instead of chatting with strangers online．（合理的建議）

點(diǎn)評 這是一篇小作文，主要針對中學(xué)生玩手機(jī)的現(xiàn)象展開議論．結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱為第一人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用．寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用．寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系．