Question

【題目】寫作

假如你是Alice, 你想寫一封推薦信，推薦你的同學Daniel獲得今年的新星獎。推薦

信字數(shù)為80詞左右。開頭，結尾已給出，不計入總字數(shù)。

Excellent qualities （優(yōu)秀的品質）	Good examples （好的事例）
樂于助人	1．經(jīng)常幫助鄰居修電腦； 2．……（至少一點）
聰明	1．學東西快，努力學習各門學科； 2．野營時甚至會搭建帳篷。
勇敢	一個周日的早晨，他像往常一樣，坐在湖邊看書。突然聽到一個女孩大聲呼救，他跳進湖里，把小女孩從水里救了上來，并送她回家。
……	……（至少兩句）

Dear Sir / Madam,

I would like to recommend Daniel for this year’s Young Star Award.

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All the students in our class think that Daniel should get the award. We look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours faithfully,

Alice

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

Dear Sir / Madam:

I would like to recommend Daniel for this year’s Young Star Award.

Daniel is a helpful boy. He often helps his neighbors fix computers. He always gives his seat to someone on the bus.He is also clever. He learns things quickly. He works hard on all the subjects. He is even able to put up tents when we go camping.He is brave, too. One Sunday morning, he sat by the lake and read books as usual. Suddenly, he heard a girl calling for help. He jumped into the lake and saved the girl from the water. At last, he sent her home.Daniel is polite and kind to others. He always says “hello” to his teachers. He thinks carefully when he works. He plans everything well. He often takes part in all kinds of activities like collecting clothes and books for the children in need.

All the students in our class think that Daniel should get the award. We look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours faithfully,

Alice

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，本文推薦Daniel 獲得今年的新星獎，內容應包括表格內所有的信息。介紹Daniel的優(yōu)秀品質和好的事例。結合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結構主要為系表結構，注意一些常見句式的應用，比如：I would like to...，Daniel is ...，he sat by...，He thinks ...，All the students in our class think that....等句式的應用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關系。

寫作亮點：本文結構緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了我想要推薦Daniel獲得今年的新星獎，接下來介紹Daniel的品質和所做的好事，最后全班同學認為Daniel應得到這個獎。此處would like to, give one’s seat to, work hard, put up, hear sb doing sth, call for help, be kind to, take part in, all kinds of, look forward to等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。