Question

4．學校開展評選"最佳學生"活動，你向校長推薦Sandy為"最佳學生"．要點如下：
1．Sandy又高又苗條．她臉上總是帶著微笑．
2．她樂于助人．總是主動給我們提供幫助．經常幫助我們了解新世界．
3．她喜歡上DIY課程．擅長于裝飾房子．她總是為她朋友制作紙玫瑰．
4．上周在學校秋游期間，她為同班同學拍照．并把照片放在她的網頁上供大家欣賞．
5．她希望…
要求：
1．文章須包含所有要點，語句通順、意思連貫；
2．詞數(shù)80個左右；
3．對第5要點做1-2句的發(fā)揮，文章意思完整．
4．開頭和結尾已經給出，不計入詞數(shù)．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
She is good at decorating the house．她擅長裝飾房子．
be good at 擅長…
【高分句型二】
She hopes to be an excellent teacher她希望成為一名優(yōu)秀的老師．
hope to do sth 希望做某事

解答 Sandy is tall and slim．She often wears a smile on her face．（Sandy又高又苗條．她臉上總是帶著微笑．）She is helpful．She always offers us help．She helps us learn about the new world．（她樂于助人．總是主動給我們提供幫助．經常幫助我們了解新世界）She likes taking a course in DIY．She is good at decorating the house．【高分句型一】She makes paper roses for her friends．（她喜歡上DIY課程．擅長于裝飾房子．她總是為她朋友制作紙玫瑰）Last week，she took photos for her classmates during the school trip．She put the pictures on her homepage to let the classmates enjoy them．（上周在學校秋游期間，她為同班同學拍照．并把照片放在她的網頁上供大家欣賞．）She hopes to be an excellent teacher．【高分句型二】（希望）

點評 寫作要抓住要點．要在"準"字上下功夫．在寫作中注意人稱與謂語動詞的數(shù)關系和動詞時態(tài)等諸多方面．在平時的練習中，注意多背誦范文，對于寫的好的句子要進行默寫，這樣在寫作時就能寫出準確地道的作文．