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8．"廣場(chǎng)舞"square dancing作為一種集體娛樂(lè)健身的活動(dòng)方式越來(lái)越受到中國(guó)大媽的追捧，但其所產(chǎn)生的噪音，或因搶占地盤(pán)所引發(fā)的矛盾也越來(lái)越多，請(qǐng)談一談你對(duì)"廣場(chǎng)舞"的看法并提出適當(dāng)建議．

advantage	keep fit
	make new friends
	…
disadvantage	make much noise
	fight for a dancing place
	…
My opinion

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Square Dancing
Square dancing is becoming more and more popular with the elder people in China．Not only is it a good way of keeping fit，but also it's a good time for the elder to walk outdoor to make and meet friends．No wonder that most dancers say that dancing makes them look younger and feel more confident．However，when people in large number dance to loud music，they create the noise that neighborhoods find it painful to bear．What's worse，some dancers even fight for a certain place to dance and lead to blooding．
In my opinion，we shouldn't dance too late or dance to too loud music to disturb others'life．Let's dance politely and happily．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
①Not only is it a good way of②keeping fit，but also ③it's a good time for the elder to walk outdoor ④to make and meet friends．這不僅是一種保持身體健康的好方法，也是老年人在戶外散步、結(jié)交朋友的好時(shí)機(jī)．
①not only…but also…不但…而且，前一個(gè)分句采用倒裝語(yǔ)序．
②keep fit保持健康
③It+be（名詞）+for sb+to do sth"對(duì)某人來(lái)說(shuō)做某事是…的"；it為形式主語(yǔ)，不定式為真正主語(yǔ)
④動(dòng)詞不定式作目的狀語(yǔ)
高分句型二：
①No wonder ②that most dancers say③that dancing makes them look younger and feel more confident．難怪大多數(shù)的舞者說(shuō)，跳舞使他們看起來(lái)更年輕，更自信．
①no wonder 難怪
②that引導(dǎo)主語(yǔ)從句
③that引導(dǎo)賓語(yǔ)從句作say的賓語(yǔ)

解答 Square Dancing
Square dancing is becoming more and more popular with the elder people in China．Not only is it a good way of keeping fit，but also it's a good time for the elder to walk outdoor to make and meet friends．【高分句型一】No wonder that most dancers say that dancing makes them look younger and feel more confident．【高分句型二】【廣場(chǎng)舞的好處】However，when people in large number dance to loud music，they create the noise that neighborhoods find it painful to bear．What's worse，some dancers even fight for a certain place to dance and lead to blooding．【廣場(chǎng)舞的壞處】
In my opinion，we shouldn't dance too late or dance to too loud music to disturb others'life．Let's dance politely and happily．【我的看法】
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