Question

19．每年的8月8日是"全民健身日"． 為了讓這項(xiàng)運(yùn)動(dòng)更加深入人心，某英文雜志的欄目正在以"Let's Do Exercise Together"為題，向廣大中學(xué)生征文．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面表格中的要點(diǎn)提示寫(xiě)一篇文章，向該欄目投稿．

運(yùn)動(dòng)的重要性	運(yùn)動(dòng)的時(shí)間與方式
?保持健康； ?培養(yǎng)個(gè)人的性格	?上學(xué)時(shí)步行或騎自行車(chē)； ?體育課做各種鍛煉（跑步、打籃球…） ?周末與朋友去爬山、游泳等．

參考詞匯：keep fit，train a person's character，on foot，PE class，climb mountains
要求：（1）詞數(shù)：80詞左右，開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
（2）短文中不得出現(xiàn)真空的人名、校名和地點(diǎn)．
Let's Do Exercise Together
It's very important for us to do exercise．Doing exercise can not only help us keep fit，but also help to train a person's character．What's more，doing exercise helps us to study better．
We can do exercise whenever we want．It is good for us to go to school on foot or by bike．In PE classes，we can do all kinds of exercise，such as running，jumping，playing basketball and so on．On weekends，we can climb mountains or go swimming with our friends．Also，we can go hiking during the vacations．
Let's do exercise and have a healthy lifestyle together!．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容是以"Let's Do Exercise Together"為題說(shuō)說(shuō)運(yùn)動(dòng)的重要性和方式．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱(chēng)主要為第一、三人稱(chēng)．
寫(xiě)作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開(kāi)作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開(kāi)作文，即本文的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：
1．運(yùn)動(dòng)的重要性：保持健康、培養(yǎng)個(gè)人的性格；
2．運(yùn)動(dòng)的時(shí)間和方式：上學(xué)時(shí)步行或騎自行車(chē)、上體育課做各種鍛煉、周末與朋友爬山游泳等
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：
not only…but also…不僅…而且…
help sb do sth 幫助某人做某事
keep fit 保持健康
what's more 再者
be good for 對(duì)…有益
【高分句型】
1．Doing exercise can ①not only②help us keep fit，but also help to train a person's character．
①not only…but also…不僅…而且…
②help sb do sth 幫助某人做某事，keep fit 保持健康
2．①What's more，②doing exercise helps us to study better．
①what's more 再者
②動(dòng)名詞做主語(yǔ)，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用單數(shù)helps．
3．It is good for us to go to school on foot or by bike．
it is+adj+for sb+to do sth對(duì)某人來(lái)說(shuō)做某事是怎么樣的，it是形式主語(yǔ)，動(dòng)詞不定式做真正主語(yǔ)．

解答 Let's Do Exercise Together
It's very important for us to do exercise．Doing exercise can not only help us keep fit，but also help to train a person's character．【高分句型】What's more，doing exercise helps us to study better．（運(yùn)動(dòng)的重要性）【高分句型】
We can do exercise whenever we want．It is good for us to go to school on foot or by bike【高分句型】．In PE classes，we can do all kinds of exercise，such as running，jumping，playing basketball and so on．On weekends，we can climb mountains or go swimming with our friends．Also，we can go hiking during the vacations．（運(yùn)動(dòng)的時(shí)間和方式）
Let's do exercise and have a healthy lifestyle together!

點(diǎn)評(píng) 這是一篇給出情景的圖表作文．圖表內(nèi)容較為簡(jiǎn)單，要全部包括在作文中．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫(xiě)，注意作文的條理．根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)；語(yǔ)言表達(dá)要符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣．考生在時(shí)間允許的情況下，可先列出大致提綱，再根據(jù)所給提綱或已知信息列出每段的主題句，為全文的展開(kāi)做好鋪墊．注意行文連貫，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范，不要出現(xiàn)一些諸如語(yǔ)法或詞匯的錯(cuò)誤．