Question

13．在我們周圍經常存在安全隱患，所以我們應該對安全你引起足夠的重視請以The safety around us為題，寫一篇英語短文，說說我們身邊的安全問題，內容包括：

At home	be careful with，turn off，power supply，gass holder
On the road	obey the traffic rules，not ride side by side，not listen to music
At school	not push the others on the stairs，if…accident，call 120，do some basic medical training…

要求：1．中文應包括以上信息，可適當發(fā)揮，行文連貫，書寫規(guī)范．
2．文中不得出現(xiàn)涉及考生真實信息的人名，地名或校名等．
3．文章字數在80-100之間，開頭和結尾已經給出，不計入總詞數
The safety around usSafety is very important for us students．Accidents often happen around us．So we must pay much attention to safety．At home，we should                       
If we can do all these well，we'll enjoy our life better．

Answer 1

分析 本篇話題作文要求以我們周圍的安全為話題，我們可以從三個方面：在家里，在路上，在學校，根據表格所給的信息適當增加內容．本篇是說明文，可以根據表格地點的先后順邊敘述邊說明安全的重要性．
高分句型：
1．可以使用if 引導條件狀語從句，如：It will be very dangerous if you leave the gas on．
2．使用It is+adj．for sb．to do sth 句型，如：It is nessary for us to d some basic medical training for unexpected needs．

解答 答案：be careful with fire and electricity．Make sure power supply and gas holder are turned off before you leave home．It will be very dangerous if you leave the gas on!On the road，we should always abey the traffic rules．We mustn't listen to music but pay full attention to the condition of roads．Besides，and we'd better not ride side by side．At school，we shouldn't push the others on the stairs when going up and down．If unfornately，there is an accident，call 120 as soon as possible．
  Thus，it is necessary for us to do some basic medical training for unexpected needs．In short，safety must come first．

點評 話題作文注意根據文章要點，有條理地進行敘述，注意寫后檢查是否有部分語法錯誤．